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A DREAM

A DREAM ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A wisp of smoke, a phantom limb, the dream dissolves, a sugar cube in rain. Gone. Morning light bleeds in, erasing landscapes built of moon-dust. A fiction, spun in the quiet dark. But then, a shard remains. A glint caught in the corner of your eye. A swan's cry, impossibly clear, reverberates, caught in the hollow of your chest. It returns, unbidden, unwelcome, a landscape of tilted angles and knowing eyes. You stand there, powerless, caught in its gaze, a stranger in a familiar place. Inclined to wonder, to dissect and trace, the questions remain bewilderment etched upon your face~ What did it mean? What does it mean?
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Gauthier Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 6:48 PM
Powerful poem ~ particularly love your last stanza. Well penned ~
Poet Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 12:48 PM
Joyful melodies and vivid hues dance in the light. Remarkable indeed, particularly those opening lines that seized my focus.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 5:52 PM
aww, thanks for your encouraging and kind comments, dear Sotto. Appreciate your visit today; have a splendid weekend!
DiMino Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 7:48 AM
Great poetry! You get a FAV! from me.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 5:53 PM
awww, thank you for the FAV, Joe. Color me humbly grateful...wishing you a pleasant weekend, Sara
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