A Dream

A Dream

Two
Of us
You and I
Together now
Along the same path
We walk, locked hand in hand.........
Awake now, I realize
It was only another dream
On my heart lies a precious wish
Wishing, just once, for it to become real.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Guzzi Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 4:29 PM
Amazing how people think and wish the same dreams. Read Above Desire Miriam. Light & Love Debbie
Mcmorrow Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 12:29 PM
Im not to sure what an etheree is, but i can say this is a really well written poem. i also want to thank you for commenting on my work. Steven
Gass Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 9:48 PM
This is a wonderful etheree. The form is perfect and the sentiment touching. Hope your dreams come true! Love Robin
Richards Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 5:45 PM
A lovely Etheree...very nicely done! ~ Carrie
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