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A Dream

A Dream by Amy Swanson I thought you were a dream and then I turned around… there you were Your smile lit up my world like sunshine in the sky You touched my heart and never let it go. We laughed like little children playing in the rain and for a moment time stood still Your heart with mine beating as one spirit to spirit soul to soul. But that was another time, another place… another destiny. I thought you were a dream and then I turned around… And I awoke.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 2/8/2009 10:01:00 AM
...and I still dream... good write Amy
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Date: 11/28/2008 2:19:00 PM
this one has a great 'haunting rhythm'-feel to it- -very nice
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Date: 11/25/2008 6:15:00 PM
God Bless the dreamers. Beautiful write. Vince
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Date: 11/24/2008 11:18:00 PM
This is so Beautiful. Just loved it. Dreams often display so much of the feelings. Welcome to poetrysoup. Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/24/2008 4:35:00 PM
Aww, beautiful dream, beautiful poem. Maybe it is an omen of things to come. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar
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