A Draconian State

Orders descend like sharpened hail
each shard cutting language to ribbons.
We learn to swallow pain quietly,
to bow our eyes before the flag of silence.

Walls do not need ears...
fear builds its own cathedral,
where every heartbeat kneels
to the god of obedience.

Children are taught to trace straight lines,
never to bend them back into loops.
Curves are forbidden
too dangerous a hint
that what dies might begin again.

Even breathing is tallied,
counted like coins in the dark.
Still, a single breath slips past.
Unmeasured, unowned 
a secret chord that rattles
the cage of silence.

From that small ignition,
the world remembers how to grow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 4:47 PM
your poem was vividly descriptive of the dark side of the Draconian state. I love the light of hope at the end. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
Velasco Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 6:58 PM
Thanks Sara! I'm glad the glimpse of hope came through. Hugs back!
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