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A Dowry of Dreams

Dreams are approaching my Love following the stars to your heart, beside your body I breathe and gaurd your lips the sentinel of your stellar song, the heat along your lyrics listening to your language of smooth beauty unfurling lunar fabrics wasting all the wrong that reaches for your innocence, demons dare not the sharp sheen of my devoted dagger, death will not tresspass within the life of your love, There is a sweet ancient spirit in you born from the sun and salt of sorrow and seduction a sad nobility that fights for fragile kisses, to uplift the underworld, bring the drum beats of savage, hot lights into focus on the firmament hush the stars that wait softly for sweating bodies of fire - J.A.B.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/29/2024 2:53:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jay Loveless

Date: 4/10/2015 8:10:00 PM

Oh this is fabulous?

Justin Bordner
Date: 4/11/2015 1:35:00 PM

Fabulous dreams for hearts racing into destiny's demands...your heart always comes through Jay...J.A.B.

Jay Loveless
Date: 4/10/2015 8:11:00 PM

Oh I just realized why it puts a ? Everytime I put a heart it does it lol <3 <3 <3 Have to remember to make em that way

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/29/2015 9:37:00 PM

That sweet ancient spirit hush hushes the stars and lullabies the moon as so it seems.You are a romantic warrior-This is a beauty -Charma

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/31/2015 1:55:00 PM

Her spirit is an moves the stars and opens the moonlight...romantic warriors protect rare beauty my Lady Hawk...J.A.B.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/25/2015 3:42:00 AM

I am sorry Justin I was using the phrase "Steal a woman's heart" in its figurative meaning not its literate meaning. I followed it with words that in their essence I believe meant the same as your own interpretation. I thought your poem quite brilliant. The last thing I was trying to do was to offend you. I am so sorry if you found my wording careless. I will be more careful in the future. I have the upmost respect and love for everyone. Lots Of Love, Armand.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/26/2015 2:47:00 AM

No worries Brother Armand...strength and love prevail. You have the strength of a lion, I thank you for your grace. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/24/2015 7:01:00 AM

You have a gift of seeing the embodiment of a woman's essence. This is a rare gift especially when expressed by one as talented as you are with a pen.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/24/2015 6:26:00 PM

The quill follows the heart my friend...her essence, a fire on love's alter. Your kindness means alot to me Richard, thank you. J.A.B.

Anastasia Denny

Date: 3/23/2015 4:50:00 PM

this touched my heart i love it

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/24/2015 6:15:00 PM

That makes me proud, and feeling very fortunate, to share the feeling of devotion with other strong and sensitive souls Anastasia...J.A.B.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/23/2015 3:09:00 PM

Beautiful tone to this one, tender, sweet and fierce all at the same time. Congrats on POTD! ~jan

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/24/2015 6:11:00 PM

Yes Janet, she brings it all together for me, its a sweet touch of passion...J.A.B.

Timothy Jacks

Date: 3/23/2015 2:32:00 PM

Nice poem! I really it enjoyed it, you pretty good

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/24/2015 6:06:00 PM

I enjoy being in her heart, its pretty, and good. Thanks Timothy. J.A.B.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/23/2015 1:14:00 PM

Congratulations on this fine poem being chosen POTD.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/24/2015 6:00:00 PM

Nothing is finer than a woman Connie...J.A.B.

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/23/2015 12:05:00 PM

Dreams are approaching us at a rapid pace! We must follow them if we are to succeed I like the line about "the sweet ancient spirit" a lot Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/24/2015 5:58:00 PM

Dreams have their unique speeds indeed, kinda like love...yeah, sweet spirit to die for Mathew, thanks...J.A.B.

Rody Shumba

Date: 3/23/2015 10:38:00 AM

i mean this is good stuff but you should read my stuff too.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/24/2015 5:31:00 PM

Its all good Rody...J.A.B.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/23/2015 9:08:00 AM

Should steal any women's heart, the beauty of your words, the depth of your expression, the stellar imagination you weave with ease. Congratulations!

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/24/2015 3:14:00 PM

I don't steal love, I build it with a soul who's beauty I trust, and that teaches me about salvation through experirnce. To accept another's nature, without ridicule, just understanding Maurice...J.A.B.

Neva Romaine

Date: 3/23/2015 8:08:00 AM

Hey Justin, BIG congratulations on your lovely poem being chosen as POTD!! It is a deep and beautifully expressed poem of love with wonderful imagery. Well done. Be Blessed, Neva

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/24/2015 3:02:00 PM

To be reliable, and self sacraficing for the one you love is real purpose, to help them cry, climb, create, love and shine is the only friendship that means anything. Thank you Neva...J.A.B.

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/23/2015 7:11:00 AM

Grats on this poem of the day :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/24/2015 2:45:00 PM

Poem of the day, love of a lifetime Casarah...J.A.B.

Jay Loveless

Date: 3/22/2015 12:20:00 PM

And you speak of sweet tender songs, as you sing such a song yourself <3 Beautiful

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/22/2015 8:53:00 PM

Loyal love makes songs of our hearts...every song starts with a truth, and this song as this song does, and it finishes with a kiss as well Jay...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/22/2015 2:38:00 AM

There is just something so admirable of your devotion, the qualities pointed out are something to glorify between each other forever. Your love scares demons away, even death. This one touches my heart. I kiss your mind, for it brings joy and hope to mine. Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/22/2015 8:48:00 PM

Kiss my mind with lips of angel's joy Laura...we all need love that is willing to confront the darkness in our lives, able to defend our minds and bodies when vulnerable, love that understands our truths...your beauty and poetry reaches my heart as well Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/22/2015 2:37:00 AM

I cannot begin to tell you how much I love this Justin! Beautiful work!!! I love these lines..."There is a sweet ancient spirit in you born from the sun and salt of sorrow and seduction a sad nobility that fights for fragile kisses, to uplift the underworld"

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/22/2015 8:29:00 PM

A woman who won't surrender to sorrow, living to learn why beauty is fragile and precious, to touch all the wonder that she can, in so doing giving hope to the downtrodden, and honoring Divine creation Laura...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/22/2015 2:04:00 AM

To protect the one you love is a beautiful and noble thing to do, Justin. The stars will hush for bodies that can be together...without boundaries or restrictions. Love is to be celebrated in full and not in part. A passionate piece...

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/22/2015 8:22:00 PM

You are right Eileen, love not establish limits, love must provide a liberty for hearts, a freedom to realize what they need for happiness and productivity, and then to defend that love with indefatigable passion. I glad my poem spurred your heart to express it's beautiful wisdom...J.A.B.