A Double Edged Sword

The sun vanished I am left with gray skies.
As minutes turn to hours I see how time flies.
A cold wind awakens, feels like it may snow.
 I save what I can and let all else just go.

As snowflakes drift downward they cover the ground.
There is peace in silence seems no one is left around.
I listen quite closely for maybe there might be a sound.
The path is before me yet I don’t know where I’m bound.

 I wish for the sun as I long for its light.
It is the middle of the day but it feels like night.
All that is missing is all the stars and the moon,
I shall see them in a moment night will be soon.

I see the world around me but where do I fit?
I can’t see the answer from this place that I sit.
I have to have faith and a little more hope.
I need to just focus and put life in my scope.

I start to wonder for this is what I do
I try to decipher what is false and true.
The answer lies in the pieces scattered on the floor.
Things that I needed, I shall want them some more.


With all this in my head I just have to move on.
I don’t cry for spilled milk for it’s already gone.
I look to the horizon hope the answer is there.
It seems better than when, I was stuck nowhere.

As night time comes the sky does clear.
I remember the things that I once held dear.
The train is at the station so I climb on board
I watch what I pick for it’s a double edged sword.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/7/2012 5:23:00 PM
So many roads that we can take, and usually we can't see the ruts in the road until we are on it. Life I think can be a double edged sword, it can cut both ways, ether for good or bad. Well written poem, wonderful flow, and when a poem moves you to think, you know it's good...Linda
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Date: 1/7/2012 7:53:00 PM
Thanks you honor me:) You really caught the essence of the piece! Above anything else I choose to be thought provoking whether you agree or not. Have a great night and take care......Mark
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