A Dot

If I were a dot, I’d end Misery at one shot, As Mirth would tie the knot. If I were a dot, I’d remove the human’s defective clot, Bringing back the love they forgot. If I were a dot, I’d witness the beginning of a lot, Of the virtues that we have got. If were a dot, A dot, A dot… Let the greedy race rot! Non-Human Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/16/2020 5:27:00 AM

If I were a dot I would join your army.

Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 8/6/2020 5:55:00 AM

Hehe... Lucky me... Thank you mam... Much love

Kenisha Shines

Date: 6/29/2020 2:39:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem.Have a great day!

Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 7/15/2020 4:35:00 AM

Thank you.

Silent One

Date: 6/26/2020 4:44:00 PM

Great monorhymes...

Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/28/2020 5:59:00 AM

Thank you

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/17/2020 9:54:00 PM

I laughed hard at the last line. A real zinger, Jhinuk! Cheers, Gershon

Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/18/2020 11:53:00 AM

Thank you so much. I'm glad you appreciated the thought which I assumed to be nonsensical and maybe unrelatable for many... But thank you for getting the zinger.

John Watt

Date: 6/13/2020 7:52:00 PM

Very creative Jhinuk! Monorhymes aren't easy to keep the flow going, but you did it well. Best wishes in the contest ~ John

Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/14/2020 11:06:00 AM

Thank you for pouring so much love.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 7:35:00 PM

I second that emotion. this is SUPER clever!!

Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/14/2020 11:07:00 AM

Thank you for recognizing the emotion underlying. So kind of you.