A Dose of Humility

He beat upon his breast
As he fell to the ground
Mumbled words escaping
Heart's pain formed into sound

“Please…Forgive me, oh Lord
I am so full of sin
This wretched game of life
Alone…I cannot win

I’ve cheated; I’ve lusted
I’ve inflicted abuse
Dear God…I clearly see
To you…I’m of no use 

“Forgive... God…oh, forgive…”
His beard soaked up his tears
As gut wrenching sob
Gave voice to all his fears

The “righteous” man just watched
His pride filling the place
“I thank God, heaven’s light
Is shining on MY face.

Lord, you know my good deeds
I help the poor needy
I gladly give my tithe
For Lord, I’m not greedy

Oh Lord, I’m not like him
That poor man on his knees
I’m glad I can stand tall
For I live YOU to please.”

On that sinner not “saint”
The good Lord’s blessing fell
He needed a Savior
To taste heaven not hell

The other felt holy
Justified in his eyes
But the Bible is clear
He was deluded with lies

A lesson comes to us
About the sin of pride
For those who are humble
Have a place by God’s side

Be gracious and giving
Remember your true place
It’s the humble of heart
Who will see God’s dear face.

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Lamoureux Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 10:14 AM
Wow so much time has passed!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 8:51 AM
I enjoyed reading this valuables lesson again. It is important to not rest on our own deeds but rather on the gift of salvation.
Chircop Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Anen to this beauty dear.
Manassian Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Thanks, sweetie! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 8:03 AM
An excellent recap of scripture.
Manassian Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Thanks, Richard. It is one of those great stories in scripture that has staying power!
Trifiatis Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 6:18 AM
Amen! Excellent, inspiring, promising, wonderfully presented!
Manassian Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:52 AM
Thanks, my dear poet! You honor me! Me agapi!
Hunter Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 6:00 AM
This is splendid, Eileen. I wrote one yesterday about self-pride but didn't post it. Seems we're on the same wave-length for the moment..
Manassian Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:52 AM
Yes...it seems so, my dear. You know what they say about great minds, right? ;)
Hicks Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 1:26 AM
Fantastic allegory! It seems somewhat inspired by the story of the Good Samaritan. People with a deeply ingrained haughtiness (that they mistakenly call "holiness"). Those that believe will stumble, fall, and bleed countless times... believing doesn't give you perfection, but a guide to help you along the way.
Manassian Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:53 AM
Yes, Timothy....unfortunately, our righteousness is nothing but filthy rags! Good reality check. Hope all is well!
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 12:07 AM
- A poem that provides thoughts, Eileen - Well written - Have a beautiful day - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:59 AM
Thanks, my dear sweet Anne Lise...hugs and kisses right back at ya!
Merryman Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Eileen, this is a really good poetic version of the Biblical story. Well done! Love, Kim
Manassian Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Thanks ever so much, Kim, for your lovely encouraging post!
Seal Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 3:01 PM
Great write Eileen, does raise a question in my mind. What if say someone falls between the two you describe here, what happens to them? Take care, Richard
Manassian Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Hmmmmmmm.....good question. What do you think happens to them, Richard?
Tacito Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Another truly necessary piece for humanity. Wonderful!
Manassian Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Thanks, my dear Drake. Always good to hear from you!
Palli Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 1:33 PM
Nice write and good lesson for all
Manassian Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 1:45 PM
Thanks, Susan. :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace