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A Door Better Left Closed

Once she asked me, “Why do you care about me? About the life I lead, And the girl I am?” I replied, “The love I feel is beyond reach, The world I bought Is within you and all I care for Is a part of you.” She sat and stared deeply at me (with those shallow brown eyes) a whore holding the pipe, a door that releases life. A touch of the hands, The castration of the soul. The pain of addictions… That we both hold. I wish I never found this new friend, The pain she symbolizes, Is the pain I am.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/21/2011 10:05:00 AM
wonderfully expressed angst, glad you found your way here to the soup
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Date: 5/15/2011 2:51:00 PM
moving and heartbreaking
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Date: 5/15/2011 1:11:00 PM
I like this.
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