A Done Mans Thoughts

The man sits back
Thinking to himself
Trying to find himself

The time has come
For a decision
The time is nigh
To clear his vision

His thoughts are clustered
And unsure
What should he think?
What has he done?

He can’t figure out
What he needs to be alive
Why can’t he be without?
All he wants is to survive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 16, 2011 at 5:47 AM
I can relate to the confusion that comes with making a decision... It's a nice illustration for the mind to comprehend.
Roberts Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 10:28 AM
I think it's good. Isn't this about what your parents are making you choose?
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January 31, 2011 at 5:30 PM
enjoyed reading your lines today....check out some of my attempts at poetry if you have a strong mind and are daring ;)
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