A Domino Masquerade

It's a masquerade in the square,
where throngs of people strut;
ladies cleverly hide their hair
and lips smeared with pistachio nut.   

My domino is of dark red;
I have escaped from Hell
to deceive the ones who are sad,
who follow the wrong trail.    

Amid the crowd someone I seek:
that soul whose need is love;
I can deceive with looks so meek...
for how long can I rove?
 
Through dark streets and under bridges
I'll find that pretty one,  
the one who has very soft curves
and desires to be mine.
 
I'll spot her looking near and far,   
shadows may play some tricks;
she'll mistake me for her lover...
wine and mist moisten lips.  
 
Her domino dress is scarlet,
I'm tempted to touch it; 
the girl smiles, she's found her Hamlet
exuding much delight.

She boards the gondola glowing...
letting her joy sparkle,
" Wild's the night, I've waited all evening!" 
" Lucky us! " I giggle.


Written on 7/6/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/30/2016 8:34:00 AM
Your wonderful work got my attention! I am so glad to place it in the winners’ list..Congrats to you. Sara
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Date: 7/29/2016 3:44:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Andrew:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2016 3:24:00 PM
I like your rhyming style. Is the character supposed to be a demon or spirit from hell? Also, sixth stanza, line one: did you mean damino or domino? Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 7/6/2016 11:16:00 AM
Very mysterious Andrew. I read it three times and I say it's the devil. Excellent poetry my friend.
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