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A Dollhouse Just Like Home

My first grandchild was turning three, sweet girl with a motherly bent. The perfect present seemed to be a dollhouse; so, shopping we went. She found one not by accident - real bells for the front and back door, three stories, carpet on the floor two-car garage, a three bedroom, kitchen and bath. Who could want more? Memories on the breeze presumed. She had moved on, Kid's Kraft was done. Trying to hide my discontent, I asked, “What is wrong with this one?” “It’s not real.” Not like home she meant; her place, the five-room flat they rent. The Little People caught her eye "Here is my house," I heard her cry. there's mom, dad and me, just like home." With three dolls to boot, a good buy; no chic decor, no polychrome. written 1/30/2018

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Date: 2/15/2018 10:53:00 PM
All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, RAP - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/16/2018 8:18:00 PM
What welcome words, Gregory. Thank you.
Date: 2/12/2018 3:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Reason. I can totally relate.
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Date: 2/16/2018 8:21:00 PM
You have to be a grandpa, or at least a dad...There's nothing quite like helping your kids with a yard sale and finding items you have given them going fast and furious, or worse still, remaining untouched on the tables. Life gets amusing.
Date: 2/7/2018 3:14:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem..you are an expert artist ..first time I read your poem and I am impressed..Congrats on your first place win.
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Date: 2/7/2018 7:45:00 PM
thank you, Vijay, your words are encouraging to me.

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