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A Distant Dream

A distant dream Keeps calling me A distant dream Keeps calling me I say, "How can I ?" It says,"Yes you will." I say,"You are a stranger." It says, "I am your life." A distant dream Keeps calling me Doesn't let me sleep Says," I am not meant for it." when I am down Makes me smile from up above A distant dream Keeps calling me I say,"You are not my world." It says, "Is world enough?" Keeps me going And sees that me I m through A distant dream Keeps calling me It gets closer and closer remains a no distant dream And paves the way to Another distant dream......... A distant dream Keeps calling me A distant dream Keeps calling me A distant dream Keeps calling me

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Date: 12/10/2017 8:21:00 PM
I see this is your second best poem at Soup. It really is good (returning to it because I can't find one of yours I have not read and I'm in a rush. sorry, Arnand) Hoping to have more time during my Xmas break.
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Date: 4/3/2016 4:38:00 AM
Such a fantastic lyric!
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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/3/2016 7:01:00 AM
Thank you for your visit dear friend.....Pl do give me suggestions anytime you feel...
Date: 3/30/2016 11:16:00 AM
Wow... Beautiful lyrics... I just loved the way of expressing your distamt dream...
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Anand Parmale
Date: 3/30/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thanks Echo for your appreciation...
Date: 3/29/2016 12:49:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend and have a beautiful feeling of echos. Well done. Loved always, bl
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Anand Parmale
Date: 3/30/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you BL
Date: 3/25/2016 11:21:00 AM
Anand, well done, I see you love the lyric form, and I love the echoing refrains too, 7 ~
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Anand Parmale
Date: 3/29/2016 4:05:00 AM
Yes Constance!!! I write on music so call them lyrics....Donno much abt other forms.....
Date: 3/4/2016 11:00:00 PM
I really like this one, Anand and i enjoyed the echoing effect of the refrain!
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Anand Parmale
Date: 3/5/2016 12:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea!!! I am so happy to read this from you....It will definitely motivate me ...Thanks again

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