A Dinner Party At Miss Marple's

It was the peak of summer
In St. Mary Mead.
Miss Marple and friend
Had many to feed.

They hired a Butler 
To meet their need.
"We must have wine at the party!"
They both agreed.

But like any sleuth,
Miss Marple's eyes
And ears were sharpened.
They became mini spies.

Seemingly scatty
In her old lady guise.
Would hints be dropped?
Or would the guests be wise?

Four mere days prior
An innocent dropped dead.
For out of the blue,
A bullet whizzed through their head!

This was not the topic
Conversed. But instead,
The guests talked trivia.
Pets, careers, kids, bed!

But Marple is not one
Who is easily deceived.
She was more with it
Than people believed.

Dotting I's, crossing T's
She at once perceived.
She shrugged, smiled sweetly
Content and relieved.

"Why should this man be
Brought to my attention?
Why hire him?"
She held the suspension...

All felt the heat 
Of the rising tension.
"All is now clear. Though
It was not your intention."

Her eyes swept the room
And stopped, meeting his.
Could it really be him?
What's the meaning of this?

All were astonished.
Dumbfounded. Speechless.
Suspicion fell on the Butler!
Was it him? No or Yes?


Written on July 15th 2022
For the "One In Five 2" contest
Phrase 2 (Suspicion fell on the Butler)
Sponsor: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 7/31/2022 10:56:00 AM
I love your creation for The Butler. So clever! Congrats on your win!
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 7/31/2022 12:39:00 PM
Thanks Ann. Miss Marple jumped straight into mind with this particular choice of phrase. A truly enjoyable write. ;)
Date: 7/30/2022 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Natasha
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 7/31/2022 12:38:00 PM
Thanks Terry :-)
Date: 7/30/2022 9:45:00 AM
Did the butler have an alibi?, Very nicely written, Congrats on your win Natasha
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 7/31/2022 12:37:00 PM
Hi Joseph, that's up to the reader to decide. Was she looking at the butler? Was he set up? Is he scapegoat or is he guilty? Each reader can choose for themselves and create their own version in their minds. Thank you for the amazing placement. Love the multiple choice idea for contest. More please!
Date: 7/30/2022 6:41:00 AM
The guests talked trivia…but Miss Marple was not easily deceived. Congratulations, Natasha!
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 7/30/2022 8:49:00 AM
Hi Kim! Congrats on your win too. It was a fun contest to try. Love the multi choice phrases. Hope more like this will come up. It was this contest that inspired my current contest so it's great the way on soup one idea can lead to another. We just never know where the inspiration will come from. All the best :-)
Date: 7/21/2022 5:09:00 PM
A great mystery and contender! Linda
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Date: 7/16/2022 12:30:00 AM
Love Miss Marple and love the poem….well written Natasha…..Debx
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 7/16/2022 1:07:00 AM
Hi Deb, yes, I love Geraldine McEwan's version of her. She's my fave. When I saw the second phrase as an option, the Maple episodes shot into my mind. And I thought, why not? Lol. Glad you enjoyed :-D all the best.
Date: 7/15/2022 6:47:00 PM
Enjoyed the read! Good luck! Aloha!
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 7/16/2022 1:05:00 AM
Thank you :-D
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