A Diminished Respect

There was a time.

There was a time
When your fabled dreams
Seemed honest

A time when
Your open arms
Coated in dented silver and tainted dreams
Understood my Size 12 shoes

When the world seemed to be against you
Yet, still,
Your blunt eloquence welcomed me home

Then, your “rainbow”…
…shat
           t
                er
           ed

Your heartbeat became an arrhythmia of petulant theatrics.

Your topaz coated spit
Released from refilled white-out bottles,
Brushing away quartered moons of an iridescent shame

A copycat of robotic muses
Infringing upon your pedestal,
Turned loud mouth, afflicting broken tongue

The “Stalin” of a messenger’s wit,
You raised your voice to a poignant sky!!!

And, as if Yahweh cured your muted disorders,
EVERYBODY HEARD YOU!!!

Including me

That was your goal…
…excluding me

From incipient edge, I witnessed you,
A turpentine puddle in front of a confessional booth 
On a melancholic Thursday morn,
With ripened glares to avoid your hallways

Tangled, dangling pacifiers as your doorbell

...

There will come a time.

There will come a time
When social feeds will deprive your vexing smile
Of validation

Where ignorant heartbeats will awaken
Through lyrical epiphanies
To see your “rainbow”
As a faded, stolen crayon

Where flirtatious dialect from withered accomplice
Licks cubic zirconium’s aftertaste
Forgetting that karma doesn’t tolerate one-night stands

For me, that time is now.

Then, I knew who you were.

Now, I know who you are.

You are not what you say.

A false advertisement in Sunday’s illiterate paper…
…with erased verbatim amongst your mirrored peers

Remembering how you falsified truth’s smile

Dire requests for empathetic warmth of our yesterdays
Yet, my Agnostic coat could never be thick enough
For your saturated, dual face

©Drake J. Eszes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/19/2013 9:49:00 AM
BAM!!!!
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James Kelley
Date: 12/19/2013 11:16:00 AM
yuuuppp
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Date: 12/19/2013 10:05:00 AM
Emeril style!!! =D
Date: 12/17/2013 6:02:00 PM
Love it! Great words, interesting read :)
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Date: 12/18/2013 12:14:00 AM
Hi & thanks! Nice to see you around again.
Date: 12/6/2013 4:24:00 PM
Unfortunately, I have known many people like this in my lifetime. And, now I am forced to feel like I can't trust anyone, anymore. Except, for those who have experienced the same thing! Another deep and captivating write by you, my friend! So well done, Drake!
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Date: 12/6/2013 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kelly. I relate FULLY to what you're saying. But, I will always give benefit of the doubt to somebody new. No need to punish a new person with past indifference...unless they play with my heart. Then, all gloves are off. :) Many thanks again to you!
Date: 12/5/2013 11:04:00 PM
This is a captivating and a poem that is full of passion for revealing the double sided coin! You are a master at writing these poems my friend, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/6/2013 12:23:00 AM
"Double sided coin"...indeed, Russell!!!! Thank you so much!
Date: 12/5/2013 8:26:00 PM
Yowser.....!!! Have you ever used a sand-blaster???? You wouldn't need to rent one.......just spout off this poem, and paint will peel right off her face!! You are ssooo good at saying what you feel !! Awesome!
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Date: 12/6/2013 12:22:00 AM
LOL!!!! Classic!!! Sand-Blaster Poet? You might be onto something, Carrie...thank you for making me laugh before bed. You rock!
Date: 12/5/2013 7:11:00 PM
Love this one. Had to read it a few times with how great it is.
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Date: 12/6/2013 12:21:00 AM
Hey there, Tahnee!!! That's very much appreciated! It was nice of you to stop by!
Date: 12/5/2013 12:07:00 PM
What a superb end to this one Drake! Loved each and every line.. You said it all and I love the title too ;)
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Date: 12/6/2013 12:20:00 AM
Ahh, you just need better inspirations, I think. ;-)
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Wilma Neels
Date: 12/5/2013 12:38:00 PM
hehehe don't worry Drake still around. Words have dried up I think :D
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Date: 12/5/2013 12:30:00 PM
WILMAAAAA! =D Hi there & thank you so much! Just when I thought you disappeared on me. YAY!
Date: 12/5/2013 8:17:00 AM
I can't read a poem of yours just once. There are so many layers of emotion tied with barbed wire of brutal honesty. You outdid yourself on this masterpiece. The line that jumps out at me is 'your rainbow as a faded stolen crayon" So many of us paint out lives with colors stolen from someone else's dreams.
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Date: 12/5/2013 8:56:00 AM
Monterey, that's just so cool of you to say that. Yes, I've met quite a few like that. It's a very sad thing to witness, still, in our daily lives. A riveting comment! Thank you so much! =D
Date: 12/4/2013 9:10:00 PM
Wow! Impressive, passionate piece. I love how you formatted it, especially the word "shattered."
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Date: 12/5/2013 8:41:00 AM
Now that is SUPER kind of you to say, Juliet. Thank you so very much!
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/4/2013 9:11:00 PM
Adding to faves.
Date: 12/4/2013 7:21:00 PM
Hi Drake I was looking for your take on the other mans clothes poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/5/2013 10:07:00 AM
Looking forward to seeing what you come up with. Let me know when you post it.
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Date: 12/5/2013 8:29:00 AM
Coming today or tomorrow. ;-)
Date: 12/3/2013 6:54:00 PM
Oh lots of fav lines! [an arrhythmia of petulant theatrics][ flirtatious dialect from withered accomplice/ Licks cubic zirconium’s aftertaste] very nice! Light & Love
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Date: 12/3/2013 10:27:00 PM
Hey Debbie! That is greatly appreciated. Very cool of you to say. Thanks so much for coming by here. I owe you a visit or 3 to your stuff again. :)
Date: 12/3/2013 6:49:00 PM
powerful and deep full of truth great poem
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Date: 12/3/2013 6:50:00 PM
Very cool of you to say. I do appreciate it, Joseph!
Date: 12/3/2013 5:54:00 PM
Tough and eloquent, as always... Jack
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Date: 12/3/2013 6:13:00 PM
Indeed, Jack. Thank you so much!
Date: 12/3/2013 8:23:00 AM
I met a man this weekend from South America and the thing he found most disturbing about north American culture was how so few people where actualy who they presented themselves to be. Your poem is a good example of that. That makes me very sad. I really felt this one, it resonated and shook me to the core. I have had this experience more times than I wish to admit. But other times people have surprised me in the most delightful ways.
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Date: 12/3/2013 9:14:00 AM
As have I. :) Amen to that! =D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2013 9:08:00 AM
I choose to spend my time with people who are real. Life is to short to waste time on the fakers.
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Date: 12/3/2013 8:31:00 AM
It makes me very sad too. How often folks claim to care for others, yet scream/whine/pout aggressively when things don't go there f-ing way. They're very quick to remove what they say...yet, it changes nothing about their character. Utter pettiness. Still, like you, some refresh my hope in how adults should be. Thank you so much, Richard!
Date: 12/3/2013 4:24:00 AM
this nails the argument that without compassion. or deep honesty, one is doomed...of his own volition...payback time to love yourself again, drake ( froget the victim mode).. this is slam---- brutal and true the way it should be... impactful!..huggs
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Date: 12/3/2013 6:36:00 AM
I believe you have said it all here. I will step back with a smile on my face. You get it. Damn right. You friggin rock, Nette!!!! ;-)
Date: 12/2/2013 7:38:00 PM
Good evening Drake...wow...I was living my own nightmare reading this! Such a relatable poem...like a room you can just step into and walk through the words.....awesome....
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Date: 12/3/2013 6:35:00 AM
Indeed, I understand what you mean. Thank you so much, Donna!
Date: 12/2/2013 5:07:00 PM
You stand head and shoulders above us dear friend! As always your creative writings blow me away... I am honoured to call you a friend! Good wishes, Drake, for the coming season!
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Date: 12/2/2013 5:10:00 PM
Jack, my good man, I don't want stand above anybody. I want to be by yours & everyone else's side. That's enough to make this heart content. As for you too, sir. To another awesome & memorable season upon us, yes! =)
Date: 12/2/2013 3:27:00 PM
Ow this is very deep Drake.Dual face..A fading stolen crayon ..Wowzer.This is such a profound poem.There s nothing worse in life than to be dishonest ..Living a lie might harm those one care for but mostly his/her ownself.I hope this is fiction Drake.A very deep poem.Tnks for stopping by my humble verse : )
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Date: 12/2/2013 4:35:00 PM
I was the cause & victim of these things in my life back then. Today, I have to continue being a better man. It's not always easy, society today makes it so much worse than ever to be that way. But, in the end, only we make it harder on ourselves than it should be. Thank you so very much, Charmaine. HUGE HUG! =D
Date: 12/2/2013 11:04:00 AM
"Shattered" in illustration was a brilliant addition as well
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Date: 12/2/2013 11:32:00 AM
Indeed! Glad you caught that. =D
Date: 12/2/2013 10:57:00 AM
By the masters pen I wept in bitter empathy for the anguish suffered. A stunning poetic description of betrayal. Agnostic comrades resonating within a similar vein, reaches out in friendships embrace saying... The human subject depicted is not worthy of the writer. Entirely worth the wait Sir Drake
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Date: 12/2/2013 11:31:00 AM
My goodness, your comment shines, Sarai. You understand this too. That means so much. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! =D
Date: 12/2/2013 10:56:00 AM
- Wow .... hour of truth has arrived .... - Deep and "black edges" .... well done ... as always, Drake ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2013 11:14:00 AM
It has, yes. ;-) You're awesome, Anne Lise. Thank you so much!
Date: 12/2/2013 10:07:00 AM
Drake...........this is a cutting poem. Very very....vengeful and sad. As a literary piece...of course, very deep.
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Date: 12/2/2013 10:49:00 AM
Yes, spot on. Thanksgiving had me away from the Internet and I was ENTIRELY ok with it. :) It's good to be back. You're very welcome.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 10:28:00 AM
I missed your visits.......BTW! ;) Thanks for your visit to my last poem......and the lovely comment. As usual......you are very very kind and sweet in the comments you make.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2013 10:27:00 AM
Yes......if a person is who they claim to be......good point. Transparency is the ultimate desirable trait. Of course, sometimes with transparency comes pain.....being rebuffed.....being misunderstood...Fine and delicate balance there. This is a very powerful piece. I'm sure the inspiration behind it was even more so......
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Poet Tacito
Date: 12/2/2013 10:17:00 AM
Hi & yes, Eileen. =) There comes a point when you start seeing/hearing the same apologies from those who continue to make the same mistakes. If a person is who they claim to be, why aren't they behaving as such? Why do they only behave when they are caught? 'Tis a pity in this continued, gradual declining of humanity. But, hope does still remain...thank you so much, Eileen.
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