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A Different Story

the sun once raised in a time
when i thought i had it all
the world, the universe, was mine
i never thought I'd ever fall

until one day i hear a squeak
and up to heaven i pull my eyes
i stare and ogle to get a peak
and there an angel towards me flies

the sun now set, its another time
i lost my throne and all my glory
still in the dark her light will shine
my god, this girl .. a different story

like a name written on a sandy shore
taken away by salty waves
she disappears with nothing more
than a distant look and silent waves

again that squeak someday i hear
i look up, and among the clouds
her face is carved, shouting im here
this time im staying, i take my vows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/11/2010 2:32:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tarek. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:43:00 AM
Hey Tarek, welcome to PS! I enjoyed reading your poem. I know that you'll like it here. Please keep writing and leaving comments so that others may read yours. Thank you for leaving comments for me. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 7/10/2010 10:56:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv..
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