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A Different Story

the sun once raised in a time when i thought i had it all the world, the universe, was mine i never thought I'd ever fall until one day i hear a squeak and up to heaven i pull my eyes i stare and ogle to get a peak and there an angel towards me flies the sun now set, its another time i lost my throne and all my glory still in the dark her light will shine my god, this girl .. a different story like a name written on a sandy shore taken away by salty waves she disappears with nothing more than a distant look and silent waves again that squeak someday i hear i look up, and among the clouds her face is carved, shouting im here this time im staying, i take my vows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/11/2010 2:32:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tarek. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:43:00 AM
Hey Tarek, welcome to PS! I enjoyed reading your poem. I know that you'll like it here. Please keep writing and leaving comments so that others may read yours. Thank you for leaving comments for me. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 7/10/2010 10:56:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv..
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