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'a Depiction of Love'

each lungful of air 
a reminder of God’s love
depict love and care  
promote and embrace His will
every moment you get


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Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 7/29/2011 4:18:00 PM

Hey My Sweet, A well deserved win. Miss you hope you keeping well:-)

Elaine George

Date: 7/29/2011 9:18:00 AM

Beautiful Tanks, wilma. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Kash Poet

Date: 7/28/2011 3:56:00 PM

Congratulations Wilma on your 1st place win.Excellent write.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/28/2011 1:33:00 PM

Beautifully expressed words of truth and wisdom, Wilma. If we all followed the message in this poem, our world would be so different. Congratulations on your big win in the contest! Love you, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/28/2011 1:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Thanks for stopping by....Sara

Joseph Osita

Date: 7/28/2011 3:57:00 AM

An excellent write!.Congratulations on your big win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/27/2011 6:30:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your first place win with these lovely poetic lines my friend.. I will not be on PS as much due to all the problems with this site .. seems no solution in sight and too much for me to cope with at this time... luv...

Amanda Moore

Date: 7/27/2011 5:50:00 PM

Congrats on your win this is lovely!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2011 2:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Mose's "Best Shot" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 7/27/2011 2:21:00 PM

Yes, indeed - this is so true. Many congrats on all your wins, Wilma : )

David Williams

Date: 7/27/2011 12:39:00 PM

hey Wilma, congrats on your well desreved win, David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/27/2011 12:30:00 PM

highly rated, wilms...fireworks of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/27/2011 12:30:00 PM

highly rated, wilms...fireworks of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/27/2011 11:57:00 AM

My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John,Wilma

John Freeman

Date: 7/27/2011 11:38:00 AM

Wilma, well said!! The sponsor receives the grace. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 7/25/2011 11:50:00 PM

Another little gem from you Wilma.Best of luck if for a contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2011 10:52:00 PM

One awesome little tanka, Wilma. I bet it's for john's contest? I don't even have the time to look for a poem like this in my bunch, let alone write one. Time time where art thou?

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/25/2011 9:06:00 PM

Lovely devotional expressions, Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2011 6:29:00 PM

Sometimes we forget how we are blessed..Good topic and presentation of the topic..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..We are doing well under the circumstances..Things could always be worse..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/25/2011 1:40:00 PM

What a lovely poem of faith, Wilma. I hope you have entered this in John's contest because I know he'll love it as much as I do. Love you and wish you success if you did enter it, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/25/2011 10:54:00 AM

That is Love indeed! Thank you for this wonderful reminder, Missy-- I definitely needed that :D I think I will take mine rainy, too :) I hear thunder right now--& heehee I see somebody's back here, hmmm?? gosh, when I read that "SB" why did I think it was negative (it was missing a letter though-- O!) haha; then I thought, Oh. SB as in Sleeping Beach? Haha no, no, no as in Silly Bozo (umm yup, that wasn't the b-word I thought, rhymed with snitch) lol I know you love me so it's Sleeping Beauty:)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 7/25/2011 10:54:00 AM