A Deep Freeze
A tangled web
woven tightly.
They were
the best of friends;
two peas in a pod.
Jim and Pete's
friendship
comes undone
over
a woman.
The woman?
Jim's former main squeeze.
A love triangle leads
to...
icy amity.
(Yalto)
"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Date written: 07/26/2020
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