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A Deep and Saddened Look Back

A Deep And Saddened Look Back On a very sad sunny day in summer's glory that tragic ending came to our love story. Midnight, a night filled with bright, full moon misery blasted me that hot day in June! Your phone call put me into epic shock your hammer had just cracked my rock. A darkened cloud descended over my life WORST PAIN EVER- loss of my dear wife! So sad.You cared not as you walked away leaving me with loving words yet to say. And destroyed was all our future plans as you sought lust with your lusting fans! As I look back and now see that event soul tells me it was truly heaven sent. Life has a plan to send us another way ignoring sad pleas and what we may say! Decades have now shown me wisdom galore revealing life then became so much more. Yet heart and soul may still remember you sad years passed, still you have no clue! There was that sweet family we never had and our love lost forever, tis' so very sad. Children, never born to grace our halls YOU NEVER HEARING YEARS OF MY CALLS! ****** ******* , 12-15-2015 Written for Silent One's , Walking Away contest. Based upon a sad event in my young life.

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Date: 12/17/2015 3:20:00 PM
Robert, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 12/17/2015 8:40:00 AM
Robert, very sad, and emotional piece, unfortunately many of us can relate to this tragedy of lost love, congratulations on #1 very well deserved.
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Date: 12/16/2015 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations my dear friend on a wonderful top win! I was so touched by this very emotive piece - the loss of a very loved one! BRAVO and a 7! Pandita
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Date: 12/16/2015 6:17:00 PM
Heartfelt and beautifully written, Robert. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 12/16/2015 5:17:00 PM
Hi Robert. Congrats for your WIN in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/16/2015 10:23:00 AM
Heartfelt Robert Congratulations on your win my friend.
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Date: 12/15/2015 7:43:00 PM
Hi Robert, I was moved by reading your poem. A very sad ending. Every line has deep emotions my friend... Sending soup mail. LINDA
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Date: 12/15/2015 7:31:00 PM
A heart felt entry! Happy Holy Days Robert Light & Love
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Date: 12/15/2015 6:53:00 PM
Robert...very emotionally raw...wonderful rhyme and flow of your words..You are very talented...thanks for sharing!! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 12/15/2015 11:15:00 AM
This is touching and can bring a tender heart to tears. I have always believed that destiny has a say in everything; all things happen for a reason; like I once wrote in one of my short poems...from ashes hope sprouts and a new flower blooms! I am glad that you found a new light in your life, Robert! // paul
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