Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Sedoka

A Day's Solitude

Washed a load of clothes
And hung them out to be dried
And busied myself all day….
As I entered in
The sleeve of the shirt…
Rose in observance.

In a gust of wind
Night clothes twined and intertwined
The harvest moon being full…..
Sparse clouds made its light
The bed side flat as desert….
The pillow plump, cool fable.

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August 18, 2014 (A Repost but never entered into any contest)
Form: Sedoka

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Sara Kendrick September 8, 2014 at 2:25 PM Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans September 6, 2014 at 12:52 PM Congratulations Dr. Mehta. I can see the clothes blowing in the wind.

Kika Ayala September 6, 2014 at 8:26 AM Congratulations, Dr. Ram on your fine win! Great imagery. Kika

Casarah Nance September 5, 2014 at 10:02 PM Interesting, I love the way clothes dance on a line in the wind. I don't know this form, but your descriptions were great. Grats on your contest placing :)

Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2014 at 5:35 PM Congratulations, DR RAM, 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, "TWILIGHT" if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA

Carolyn Devonshire November 19, 2011 at 10:41 AM I can just see the night clothes twisting in the wind, missing their place on a soft bed, Dr. Ram. Another great sedoka! Love, carolyn

Onyebuchi Okonkwo November 19, 2011 at 12:21 AM Good Sedoka doc. have a blissful day,much love~O.O.