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A Daydreamer's Love

I’ve been raptured by the ecstasy of our bliss. A peerless and unique love shared with affection and to think it all started with one longing kiss, giving us a divine and finesse connection. For our adoration is complete perfection. Our rendezvous first started midsummer in June. An acquiesce guarantee to safe dedication. I’ve always been attracted to your hymn’s attune, and grateful for your sweet God-given creation. For you bring to me a passionate sensation. Gallivanting into the depths of our promise to each other’s souls in sickness and in poor health. I will always be committed to love’s abyss, need not materials nor precarious wealth. For there are no wrongdoings or moments of stealth. Nonchalant I say to you, “can we love all night?” Pleasure beyond measure within your strapping arms. For I never knew blindness ‘til you gave me sight, and dazzled me with all your sweet debonair charms. There are never feared warnings to farewell alarms. You free me from the wickedness of hell’s defile, show me fortitude and honor when by your side. You’ve given me a life that’s faithful and worthwhile as you saved me the yearning of wanting to hide. I see your strength in me, your valued treasure pride. So I lay here and think of how you love me so, you quench my thirst, saturate me in love’s esteem. For I shall never say adieu nor let you go, our love will always be richly cherished, supreme. You will always be lover…my sweet daydream. 12 syllables in each line Best Rhyming Poem April-July15, 2018 Poetry Contest John Hamilton May 7, 2018

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Date: 7/13/2018 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Oh my! This is so beautiful, beyond beautiful... a fave.
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Nicely written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/12/2018 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura, on your excellent win with your exquisitely expressed passionate poem. A beautiful romance! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/12/2018 2:59:00 PM
This poem is so romantic and lovely Lulu. Congratulations on your deserving placement! : )
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:46:00 AM
Great win for a great piece. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Faux
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:23:00 AM
I knew this was you Laura, your inimitable style gives you away, glorious rhymes and another worthy winner!
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Date: 5/8/2018 10:55:00 PM
Oh, how wonderfully passionate and romantic, and how glorious it is to love on such a deep level! I have found two soulmates in this life, and while I lost them both, (through fault), I am so lucky and blessed to have known it ... I can tell that you, too, have been "there" - that nameless place where you are so a part of another soul that you almost feel alone - where an instant of divine ecstasy turns into infinitude. A PERFECT love poem, Luloo, and one I must fav and read again. Blessings!
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Date: 5/7/2018 12:27:00 PM
Wow so passionate and romantic, creatively expressed. I like your wording how u used it, some of them I like using myself. Seems to be about a poet lover. "For I never knew blindness till u gave me sight" ooh fantastic. Kudos. Nice to read from u again, Pleez do write your thoughts/comment on my newest poem if u can relate and all.
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