A Daydreamer

My love my symphony
My Reality
I ponder and wait for your return
To which I worry with concern
It's been far to long this war
My fingers actively write this score
my music inspires hope to your cause
As sleepless nights I long for your touch
Your sacrifices are to much
For your king and country
I wish you could see
That a woman's love needs you
Please keep safe in all you do,
remember to hold my heart in your endeavour
For I will love you forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 3:25 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
Gibson Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 3:25 PM
Congratulations on a lovely poem and win.
Gorelick Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 9:52 AM
I agree with LInda..you poem has a lovely flow to it. Congrats. BG
A. Sharma Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Wonderful wrote John ! Heartfelt and subtle ! Congrats on a much deserved win.
A   Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 6:56 PM
About your poem: This poem has natural rhyme, and flow. I like that when reading a free verse poem. Thank you for the daydreamers land. The emotions, of concerns, and love, are felt throughout the poem. Enjoyable, and deep... always~ LINDA
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April 29, 2014 at 6:50 PM
John, first things first, thank you so much for reading my latest poem.. Means a lot to me.. PS... I would call this poem, FREE VERSE... LINDA.
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