A Daydream

Sitting in front of her piano that morn.
A single thought haunts her attention.
It's a story she found on her book.
She wants to put a lyrics and notes.

So eager to create a masterpiece.
She hung awhile and start to dream.
A song of love that everyone sings.
While playing her piano in opera stage.

She is the center of attraction in the crowd.
A newborn pianist, Lola Astanova plays in sounds.
She can see Victor Babin,Simon Barere and Beethoven.
Smiling in front of her in standing ovation.

She is the hottest talk of the town.
Her masterpieces are known and pride.
A grandest dream she weaves in mind.
Has cut when a flower vase fell in ground.



** 5th Place Winner in Isiah Zerbst's Contest A DAYDREAM **

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/11/2017 3:28:00 PM
So lovely Aiyah :-) The details are amazing, the anticipation builds, all the while I am smiling.:-) A unique and delightful piece, A pleasure to read.:-) many blessings to you, lynn
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:09:00 AM
this makes me smile, i used to day dream... :) haha, Great poem, from a great poet :) keep it up AiyaH .
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/19/2014 11:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot, iel!!! .. :O))
Date: 5/13/2014 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations Aiyah..:)GBU
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/14/2014 7:28:00 AM
Thank you bhebhe Eloi... :O))
Date: 5/11/2014 10:07:00 AM
You know your music! Well done and congrats. BG
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/12/2014 12:33:00 PM
Thanks a lot ,Barbara!! :O)
Date: 5/11/2014 1:20:00 AM
Beautiful write Aiyah and so is your great win ! Congrats !
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/12/2014 12:33:00 PM
A million thanks to you, Dr. Upma!! :O))
Date: 4/30/2014 3:40:00 PM
Hi Aiyah, This is quite an interesting poem for the contest. The last two lines are especially compelling. Wishing you success in the contest and thank you for reading my work. Peace and joy, Carolyn
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/30/2014 3:57:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn for a positive feedback on my poem.. yours is truly a better one.. :O)) Thank you for dropping by... oxoxox :O)))
Date: 4/30/2014 9:54:00 AM
Weee awesome dismaying dream :) going to a momento then BANG.. :) !!!! Wonderful write ihopethis place high in the contest ... :)!!! Proud to be Pinay ..:)!!! Careful on the rains Aiyah... , olive eloisa :) thanking you for the kind comments on my writings..:).
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/30/2014 10:15:00 AM
Hey sweet Olive... Thanks dear for dropping by... your comment is always much appreciated.. !!! Rain is often falling now, and my kids love to bathe in hte rain.. I hope they won't get illness from it!! ... Take care always sweetie!!! :O)) I maybe gone for a while... will be busy in my new job ...soon.. ^__^
Date: 4/30/2014 9:41:00 AM
I would love to be able to play the piano, I live vicariously through my son, I love when he plays his Grand piano. The sound permeates our home and my spirits soar with the notes. I enjoyed your poem very much
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/30/2014 9:50:00 AM
Hi Rick!! ... oh wow!! ..what a splendid moment to play a piano w/ your kid... I dream to play one.. but I didn't learn to play even organ.. (????) .. Thanks for the visit!! :O))
Date: 4/29/2014 3:42:00 PM
Hello AiyaH, This write was so beautiful! WOW~ Love the way you write and thanks for sharing this poem with us:~) Peace, Deborah
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/30/2014 9:24:00 AM
Hi Deborah.. Thanks a lot sweet heart for a kind comment on my poem!! :O))
Date: 4/27/2014 2:16:00 AM
Hi, my dear friend Aiyah! Your poem is amazing! A perfect composition for the theme/title. Indeed, dreams are free. Kudos on this great write! TYSM for sharing! May I also have this chance to thank you for your precious time stopping by my poem/s. Sorry for late reply. I was super busy these past few days. Thanks for the inspiring comments as well. Miss u too & every1 here. Got surprise to see your comment that you're a Filipina. Nice to meet you kababayan. Many lovely hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 7:12:00 AM
Hi Leo my dearest friend... :O) Thank you for this splendid message... you are so sweet girl!! .. Yes we are both Filipina, Linda told me.. I'm so proud to meet you here in PS... And I'm happy to be your friend.. such a great honor to know you!! ..I hope you have a safe vacation.. Enjoy and have fun!!! ^_^... Rain is knocking now on PH's door...
Date: 4/26/2014 8:01:00 PM
Sometimes dreams are good enough. J.A.B.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 7:13:00 AM
Hey Justin, THank you so much for always visiting my land... My deep appreciation.. hugs!! :O))
Date: 4/26/2014 2:12:00 PM
Very nicely penned ...I enjoyed the read
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 7:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for this wonderful comment, Joseph!! :O)
Date: 4/26/2014 10:19:00 AM
I must say I have moments like this too. How you captured a possible reality is so vivid, I could almost see the character in the piece disappointed at the end while smiling at the thought that a possibility can be a reality.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 8:12:00 AM
Hi Jake.. Thanks a lot for your visit and comment.... belive in a power of dream... that's priceless and unlimited!!1 :O))
Date: 4/26/2014 8:15:00 AM
A fun story, that makes for an entertaining read. Nice work.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 8:14:00 AM
Thanks for a kind visit and comment ,Scott!! :O)))
Date: 4/26/2014 7:38:00 AM
My dear AiyaH... you are a dream! You are such a sweet soul! I am blessed to know you! Your writings are always so expressive and this one is no exception... kudos my sweet friend! Loving hugs XOXOX
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 8:13:00 AM
Oh my dearest Jack... Thank you for this very sweet comment on my poem!! .. I hope you're doing good right now... Keep strong and happy!!! :O))
Date: 4/25/2014 11:21:00 PM
Hey, Beautiful Aiyah! We All Pretty Much Hold Dreams When We Are Young And Some, Are Extraordinary As In Uniquely Gifted...Most Watch These Dreams Quickly Fly Away Such That A Flower's Vase; As Your Gifted Beauty Thus Brushed, Within A Very Wonderful Way: Poetry's Way....Have A Beautiful Day! Love, Jeremy
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 8:18:00 AM
Oh Jeremy , this is so sweet... Thanks a lot!!! :O))
Date: 4/25/2014 7:29:00 PM
I agree with Mr. Callus' most remarkable remark & I've read the poem too. Lola Astanova, BTW, is a very accomplished & talented zongoramuvész (pianist). Nice tribute to Astanova.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 8:21:00 AM
Wow... it's a big honor to have your comment on my pome... Thanks a lot!!! :O))
Date: 4/25/2014 5:32:00 PM
I suppose most of us daydream sometimes. Nothing wrong with moving into the land of fantasy...after all isn't that what many poets do?! But usually we don't like to be brought back to earth with a bang:) enjoyable read. // paul
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 8:25:00 AM
Hi Paul... sorry i just replied now... Thank you for this wonderful comment.. Yes everyone loves to dream !! big hugs!!! :O)))
Date: 4/25/2014 4:26:00 PM
.......... "A song of love that everyone sings." ... I will sing for you another day .... (must pack the trunk .... leave in seven hours ... ... - Beautiful dream ... dear friend Aiyah - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/29/2014 8:32:00 AM
Hi my dearest Anne.. .sorry for the late reply... __ I had a very busy days til yesterday... Thank you for always leaving my poem a great reward...!!! :O)) You are so sweet!!! ...I hope you enjoy your days in Turkey!! ^__^
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