A Day In the Pool

A beautiful day it is...
all these wild kids..
everyones happy
and the sun is shining bright...
it feels like im under the spot light...
the water is cool and the shade is just right...
people doing flips in the pool..
oh how cool...i should of brought a towl..
dangg..what a fool...

Hahahaha...a kid just did a front flip in 
the pool...hes smiling bright...
and is bond to do another..
woow he better stop before he gets hurt..
Were is his mother..
couples and familys are so happy...
happier than me..but its a beautiful day so 
ima stay smiling and enjoy the sun...
and burn like a piece of bread in the toaster...
hahahaha..nahh im playin...but ima go jump..
in the cool cool water...

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Date: 3/10/2016 1:24:00 AM
Shay Adams, awesome love the epic way you express this LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2010 4:16:00 PM
This is definitely not a slam. It's a happy poem. Sounds like you are with a bunch of your friends. This poem would be called a free verse. Go to the top of PS and open the 'forms of poetry" and click on "F". Scroll down and read about free verse. Actually it is quite good. Charles
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Date: 7/19/2010 9:53:00 AM
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