A Day In the Park

In the park, I’d been all day
Reading all my time away
On a park bench did I sit
Until the sky became twilit

As light for reading began to wane
I heard the tapping of a cane.
And looking up, to find that sound
‘T was an old man which my eyes found

Bent of stature, with shuffling gait
And cane helping support his weight
He moved toward me in twilight glow
The beard he donned was white as snow

His hooded cloak there in place
Hid from view his bearded face
But … he moved on steadily 
And closer then he came to me.

My gaze shifted to my book
As his passage overtook
My presence and my train of thought
On that park bench I had sought.

Then, unexpectedly,
I found the man right next to me
The hooded shroud was still in place
Preventing me to see his face.

Without a word the man sat down
And to my face that brought a frown
This bench I wanted not to share!
Yet he sat down without a care.

In protest was I about to speak
When he lifted his hand antique
And then in voice commanding low
“I’ve something you should know”.

By his voice was I hypnotized
My entire being was tranquilized
I stared at antique hands so pale
Then began the old man’s tale:

“You’ll find a house not far from here
Filled with loathing, filled with fear
And you might wonder how I know
My presence here makes it so”.

“The house, it sits on Wilsons’ Hill
All abandoned, cold and still,
Trees stay barren, grass won’t grow
And constantly do ill winds blow.”

“Birds won’t fly, dogs won’t walk
Stray cats don’t even stalk
Across or near that House of Hate …
Listen now … it’s getting late!”

“From deep within that house at night
Emits an eerie, glowing light
Oh, that light … I know it well,
It’s emitted - straight from Hell!”

“Once a man of youth was I
Having aspirations to the sky,
And senses of immortality
And those of curiosity.”

“‘Twas one summer long ago
On a dare I was to go
Walk inside that House of Hate
Then return to re-instate,”

“My belief and then decree
The house contained but normalcy.
I took the dare - I walked inside,
And since then … I there abide.”

“Now, ’tis only once a year
That I’m allowed to quickly veer
Outside it’s walls, and rusted gate
And find someone to share my fate”

“To embrace the horror I’ve endured
To expand the evil I’ve assured
To return with me and be my mate
And share the Evil House of Hate.”

The old man then turned his head,
And as I looked, with growing dread,
His hooded shroud moved in place …
At last I saw his bearded face.

Within two hollows dark as night
His eyes were embers burning bright
And just before he cast his spell
In those embers I saw Hell !

Reaching forth his ancient hand
Whose touch would be my deadly brand
I jumped back, as I screamed
I was quick, but slow it seemed.

I grabbed the cane, swinging hard
And caught the man quite off guard
I heard the thud, and filled with fear
For his status was now unclear

But … for all the things I feared
I found the man had … disappeared.
No shoes, no cloak … it was plain
Left only was his walking cane.

Many years of time have passed
And I can tell you now at last
‘T was the cane that held my fate:
I live now, in the House of Hate.

And now, too, I will stride
Through that park and take a ride
On a soul of someone there
And to you, dear reader, I say … PREPARE!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/19/2014 6:33:00 AM
Hi, Jack. I'm thinking that the message there is a universal one. There is always evil to contend with and we never know when it may appear in our lives. I like the way you presented this one. A great story and very well put together with all the imagery. Well done, Jack.... Robert.
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Date: 6/19/2014 7:38:00 AM
I agree, Robert. We never know when adversity might confront us. I'm so pleased with your commentary ... and coming from you, a poet I hold in high regard, it is even more special to me. Thank you. Jack C
Date: 5/22/2014 3:07:00 PM
Creepy, good! As an avid Steven King fan, I love a good thriller. Gave me chills! Would make a great book or movie! .... Now a fan of Jack Clark... Arlene..
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Date: 5/22/2014 3:24:00 PM
Hi Arlene! Like you, I, too, am a Stephen King fan - along with Edgar Allan Poe. I'm tickled pink that you enjoyed it ... and I thank you so much for your commentary, it's truly appreciated - especially from such a gifted poetess as yourself. Jack C
Date: 5/10/2014 11:29:00 AM
Cool story! Nicely done.
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Date: 5/21/2014 10:17:00 PM
Thank you, Mark for stoppin' buy - and leaving your comment, it's greatly appreciated! Jack C
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