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A day in the near future

What dark force wears the devil’s mark (666) And bites those thrown off “Noah’s Ark”? Dragging sweets through the mud While chomping for blood... A bully is like a white shark* *Only white sharks have better table manners, and so in the tradition of Emily Post—the innocent eventually rise up and seek justice—and use knives (and forks and spoons)! This poem was inspired by Laura Breidenthal's recent poem entitled "666".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/1/2013 7:54:00 AM
You have done a great job with this one. Your last line is awesome. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 11/19/2012 7:31:00 PM
This is awesome!! I love it, im gonna read more of your work. Thanks for stoping by my work and dont fret, I am well :)
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Date: 11/16/2012 1:26:00 AM
fantastic my friend .. terrific write on unsavory characters who r wolves in sheeps clothing ..truth be told Duke luv..
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Date: 8/21/2012 11:15:00 PM
way to be inspired, Duke. I just read her awesome poem tonight as well!
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Date: 8/21/2012 6:53:00 PM
Incredible! I loved it! :D Hope all is well and keep up the amazing work! Always, Laura
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