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A Day In the Life of Death

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I saw the carefree youth racing, Racing their cars around the town. And straight away I saw no one had Properly clipped their buckles down. They raced at breakneck speeds, Irresponsibly, through a bright red light. Lucky that time, not to hit anyone, In the still of the cold wet night. So I wiped a rag of oil over the road, Around the corner they’d surely drive. Yep, the carefree fools hit and slid, Slid to the tree, nobody would survive. Then I walked to them, the wrangled smash, With my black cape, scythe and lanky bones. I helped each up, took each away with me, Past their cold empty new tomb stones. “I am Death, I’m the end of your road” I announced on our short little stroll. Now, I’m looking forward to meeting you one day, When I’m harvesting your soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/8/2016 10:28:00 PM
I just love this sort of poetry with loads of black hum our and irresistible imagery. I am going to come back here again and again, Grim Reaper, you old doggie! ~karam~
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 6/9/2016 5:01:00 AM
Thank u karam, heaps.ur poetic friend lewis

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