Deirdre Omaidin Poet Haiku

A Day In Snowtown Haiku Numbers 25, 26 and 27

Black ice in Snowtown
Sleet and hail bash the Snowman
Wee Snowgirl just born.


Sun burst in Snowtown
White on white - the valley peeps 
Dazzling winter bride.


All's hushed in Snowtown
Tiny noses peer through glass
Robin redbreast's dead.

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Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2010 at 3:55 PM These are GREAT, Dierdre. Iespecially loved the first one. VEry creative. Andrea

Constance La France January 9, 2010 at 11:54 PM they are all wonderful... but that last one.. pulled at my heart and what a vivd picture you have painted for us with words... and thanks so much for your comment on my poem Cat Tails. I am happy you enjoyed it.