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A Day In May

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May the forth, known as Star Wars Day I’ve planned a party and buffet I’ve got son a Darth Vader mask Styling his sister’s hair’s a task I’ve got her hair buns right this year She’s dressed up as Princess Leia! Chewbacca plays with Hans Solo C3PO’s also in tow! A Lay for A Day In May Poetry Contest Sponsored By Andrea Dietrich 05/08/22

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/19/2022 1:57:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win in Andera's contest. . Blessings to you.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/18/2022 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations Jan - superb poetry my friend. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/18/2022 10:51:00 AM

Back from a universe beyond to bring stellar congratulations to you as the author of this wonderfully written "Fourth Day!"

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/18/2022 7:52:00 AM

Sounds like you really put the effort in to have a stellar interstellar bash, Jan! ~ Obi Wan-Kanobi

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/16/2022 8:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Never knew about this day. Have a blessed day................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2022 2:02:00 PM

I saw jokes about the "fourth be with you" but I did not really know about this day. CUTE one, jan. congrats in my contest.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/11/2022 9:27:00 AM

Fun love it. God bless you Jan. Love, Gina

Sally Eslinger

Date: 5/10/2022 4:24:00 PM

Such fun! The poem AND your party. We’re right with you!

Judy Ball

Date: 5/9/2022 5:16:00 PM

Too cute Jan. A most enjoyable read with great imagery. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/9/2022 3:59:00 PM

Hi Jan! Delightful Jan whimsy! Are we invited to the party?! Sounds like fun. May the 4th be with you! Hugs - but watch out for that light saber - it's a real killer! Best wishes for the contest.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/9/2022 12:19:00 PM

Hi Jan, I didn’t know May the fourth was Star Wars day. I really enjoyed your poem. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/9/2022 11:00:00 AM

The US Postal Service issued commemorative Star Wars Droids stamps for the event, so fans can send your poem to their mother with a genuine Gonk Droid stamp! Enjoyed, Jan! Aloha!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/9/2022 11:53:00 AM