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A Day In May

May the forth, known as Star Wars Day I’ve planned a party and buffet I’ve got son a Darth Vader mask Styling his sister’s hair’s a task I’ve got her hair buns right this year She’s dressed up as Princess Leia! Chewbacca plays with Hans Solo C3PO’s also in tow! A Lay for A Day In May Poetry Contest Sponsored By Andrea Dietrich 05/08/22
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Roper Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 1:57 PM
Jan, congratulations on your win in Andera's contest. . Blessings to you.
Proxenos Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations Jan - superb poetry my friend. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
Kauffman Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 10:51 AM
Back from a universe beyond to bring stellar congratulations to you as the author of this wonderfully written "Fourth Day!"
Wolf Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Sounds like you really put the effort in to have a stellar interstellar bash, Jan! ~ Obi Wan-Kanobi
Goldsmith Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 8:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Never knew about this day. Have a blessed day................
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 2:02 PM
I saw jokes about the "fourth be with you" but I did not really know about this day. CUTE one, jan. congrats in my contest.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 9:27 AM
Fun love it. God bless you Jan. Love, Gina
Eslinger Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 4:24 PM
Such fun! The poem AND your party. We’re right with you!
Ball Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 5:16 PM
Too cute Jan. A most enjoyable read with great imagery. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Kauffman Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 3:59 PM
Hi Jan! Delightful Jan whimsy! Are we invited to the party?! Sounds like fun. May the 4th be with you! Hugs - but watch out for that light saber - it's a real killer! Best wishes for the contest.
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May 9, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Hi Jan, I didn’t know May the fourth was Star Wars day. I really enjoyed your poem. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Leffanta Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 11:00 AM
The US Postal Service issued commemorative Star Wars Droids stamps for the event, so fans can send your poem to their mother with a genuine Gonk Droid stamp! Enjoyed, Jan! Aloha!
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 11:53 AM
Thanks Rico, what a fun idea for the star wars fans:-) hugs Jan xx
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May 8, 2022 at 6:03 PM
Good one Jan, didn’t know there was a Stars Wars day… Belle x
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 11:52 AM
Thanks Belle, hope hubby is doing well:-) hugs Jan xx
Faulkner Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 4:37 PM
My nephew and his fiancee got married on 05/04 because they are huge Star Wars fans - I hope she didn't style her hair in those big buns :)
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 4:44 PM
lol , did they dress up as the characters? I can imagine Darth Vader performing the ceremony lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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