Paulette Calasibetta Poet Rhyme

A Day In May

morning rises; a misty dawn,
                                 deer grazing on a verdant lawn,
                                a bluebird finds her nesting place,
                           birches, sway on the breeze with grace,
                                 tulips, in water colors at play;
                                 awakened to this day in May.










Date: May 7, 2022
For: A Lay for a Day in May Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich
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Rhymes verified on Rhymezone.com
8 syllables per line
Rhyme scheme: a/a/b/b/c/c
Placed 4th in contest

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Eve Roper May 19, 2022 at 2:01 PM Paulette, congratulations on your win in Andera's contest. . Blessings to you Paulette Calasibetta May 20, 2022 at 7:24 AM Thank you, Eve~glad you stopped by to comment. :)Paulette

Faye Gibson May 17, 2022 at 5:30 PM Beautiful images. I do so love a misty dawn, the low hanging fog in the meadows. Congratulations on your win and thank you for your kind visit and comments. Paulette Calasibetta May 18, 2022 at 4:54 AM Thank you for your visit to comment on my poem too! Glad you liked it. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith May 16, 2022 at 8:27 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write you have painted with your words. Have a blessed day......... Paulette Calasibetta May 16, 2022 at 12:58 PM Thank you Paula~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2022 at 2:00 PM A lovely poem with lovely flow. Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your win. Paulette Calasibetta May 16, 2022 at 12:57 PM Thank you Andrea for the placement in your contest. I enjoyed entering it. :)Paulette

Bill Baker May 12, 2022 at 5:08 PM Great imagery with all the color, Paulette. Thanks for sharing, Bill Paulette Calasibetta May 13, 2022 at 6:50 AM Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Gordon Mcconnell May 11, 2022 at 1:43 PM Lovely penning Paulette, with lovely imagery bringing out such a colourful day in May. Blessings always,Gordon Paulette Calasibetta May 12, 2022 at 12:36 PM Thank you Gordon~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Faye Gibson May 9, 2022 at 11:24 AM Lovely and lilting song for May. Thanks for your recent visit. Paulette Calasibetta May 9, 2022 at 4:12 PM So nice of you to stop by to comment. Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Dennis Spilchuk May 8, 2022 at 8:33 AM Delightful rhyme for the month of May. Wish you the best in the poetry contest. Paulette Calasibetta May 8, 2022 at 8:36 AM Glad you enjoyed it Dennis~ :)Paulette

Michelle Faulkner May 7, 2022 at 3:20 PM Love the peaceful feel of the dawn and bluebirds and tulips, a perfect May morning! Paulette Calasibetta May 7, 2022 at 5:02 PM Glad you enjoyed it.....it is such a beautiful time of year. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose May 7, 2022 at 2:34 PM I am beginning to wonder if you were born in the Month of May lol, you seem to be in your natural element this month dear friend, (smile ) keep going, I like where you lead me to :) Paulette Calasibetta May 7, 2022 at 5:05 PM Dear Vie, I love the Spring, and May is perfect; everything seems to be magical. We have been blessed to find each other! XO P

Mike Gentile May 7, 2022 at 12:30 PM It sounds like a perfect day Paulette! Your rhymes are superb!! Happy Saturday xxoo Paulette Calasibetta May 7, 2022 at 12:51 PM Thank you Mike~I appreciate your stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Rico Leffanta May 7, 2022 at 11:14 AM With all of the wildfires, it is not surprising to find deer grazing on the lawn - or rose garden! Enjoyed! Aloha! Paulette Calasibetta May 7, 2022 at 12:52 PM No wildfires here, in N.J., lots of deer. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Victor Buhagiar May 7, 2022 at 5:36 AM Superb imagery. Much of what you wrote is not existent in Malta (Europe). But you can find a lot of corruption on this tiny island. Paulette Calasibetta May 7, 2022 at 9:27 AM Glad you enjoyed it; I hope it gave you some peace. It is sad, not only is Malta filled with corruption; I don't think any country is free of it. Hope you have a nice day. :)Paulette