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A Day In May

One day in May, the shadowed oak - the lovey-doveyness, it spoke. Its foliage in zephyr rush. of coquette prettiness; it’s blush. Under God’s eye, unseen choir brings a lofty cheeriness with wings, a maypole merriment of tweets, its honey biz of plaited beats.

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Date: 5/19/2022 2:00:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in Andera's contest. . Blessings to you
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Date: 5/17/2022 5:12:00 PM
Lovely, Kim. I do love that rush of foliage that you write about, the language of the leaves. Thank you for your visit and congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/17/2022 8:05:00 PM
Thank you, Faye!
Date: 5/16/2022 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely May write. I can see everything. Have a blessed day....................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/17/2022 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, dear Paula!
Date: 5/15/2022 1:59:00 PM
Creative imagery, Kim. Almost put this one third. I really like it. Congrats for your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/15/2022 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Glad you liked it!
Date: 5/5/2022 1:37:00 AM
So beautifully penned "Its foliage in zephyr rush. of coquette prettiness;: Wow!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2022 10:32:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/4/2022 6:35:00 AM
This is beautiful Kim. A great entry for the contest ! All the Best !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2022 10:32:00 AM
Thanks, Valsa!
Date: 5/4/2022 3:48:00 AM
Well this must be a high place Kim, Some really evocative wording here. I'm hoping to do one for Andrea's test.. Er I mean contest..Shhh God bless now.'
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2022 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 5/4/2022 2:59:00 AM
Loved the Maypole merriment. Great song.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2022 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~
Date: 5/3/2022 6:55:00 PM
I like the middle lines the best, Kim. Different strokes for different folks. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2022 9:25:00 PM
Yes…thank you!
Date: 5/3/2022 4:38:00 PM
The maypole fun, Kim. Good luck in the contest. Blessings friend
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2022 4:45:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 5/3/2022 12:38:00 PM
I liked the addition of a May pole and a choir in your May poem, Kim. Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed the read. Hugs, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2022 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 5/3/2022 12:15:00 PM
Your day in May is so beautifully described, Kim. I loved the last two lines the best. Good luck in the contest, Evelyn :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2022 12:57:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn, and thanks for reading! I appreciate you!

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