A day for a day

I’ve made a deal,
not much of a price was paid.

One last family meal together—
Dad’s cheeks rosy,
my mother happy,
a playful pinch from my brother,
my sister’s belly laugh.

“What is your favourite room in the house?”
At 8, I said my room.
I was alone a lot,
and convinced myself I liked it.

But now,
in my late twenties,
I cry myself to sleep.
I’ve traded a day of my life
to relive another.

At 25
inside my 8-year-old body—
how do I answer?

The living room.
Where we lived the most together:
movie nights,
salty French toast,
big games,
rewatching recitals—
eating, laughing,
breathing together.

My chest tightens,
my eyes swell.
My dad rests his hand
on my shoulder.

“Well said, baby.
I like this day too.“
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Agustin Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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