U.A. Mir Poet Rhyme

A Day

A Day filled with Highs,

Arduous trudging and faces close-by,

Blistering speed but careful Eyes,


We walk without tension,

For the mind it was an extension,

Purged of any apprehension,


Merely a moment we perceive,

Baring witness to beautiful glee, 

Bringing back my moment with thee,


Pouring happiness into our empty hearts,

Our lives now far from ever being sparse,

A challenge made to who dared tear us apart,


And let us not break the habit of forgiveness,

Nor the purity of remembrance,

Thus giving our day,

Our Day, Greatness

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Sidney Hall Mad Poet August 3, 2010 at 5:24 PM Wow excellent poem homey. Welcome to the soup

Carol Sunshine Brown August 2, 2010 at 8:57 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup U.A. Mir. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol