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A David For David Contest

A DAVID FOR DAVID Long ago there lived a man-- King David, poet, ruled a land As a singer showed his heart As a warrior played his part Tried to follow God’s great law But he had a tragic flaw Stole a woman for his wife Took her gallant husband’s life Cried out in the dead of night For regret--- that was his plight Whether love was right or wrong Bathsheba was his heart's love-song

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Date: 11/15/2012 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest Victoria. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.
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Date: 11/13/2012 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win Victoria! love/hugs, LG
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Date: 11/13/2012 12:49:00 AM
Congratulations on another win Victoria, well done xx
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Date: 11/12/2012 4:02:00 PM
Victoria. love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:55:00 PM
This is a very nice, weel written poem, Victoria... Congratulations on your win... Terry
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