W J Clarke Poet Rictameter

A Date With Spring

Calm Spring 
Winters dust fades 
We’ll step out on that date 
With the symphony of bird song 
Brushing my cold bones with orange blossoms 
Above fanfares of daffodils 
Blowing ripples of warmth 
No more thermals 
Calm Spring 


Date: 21/01/23

Pen a Rictameter, Hopes of Springs return poetry contest
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Sponsor: M L Kiser

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Barbara Peckham March 31, 2023 at 4:48 PM Nicely done. I particularly liked "brushing my cold bones with orange blossoms" and the "symphony of bird song". Lovely W J Clarke April 2, 2023 at 2:18 PM Thank you Barbara. Thanks for dropping by :-)

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2023 at 3:15 PM Beautiful, W.J. congrats to you W J Clarke January 29, 2023 at 7:29 AM Thank you very much Andrea :-)

William Kelii Kekaula January 28, 2023 at 8:33 AM As a preteen new to Maine, we called them zipped-up sleeping blankets--I don't miss that...just my family I had then--effortlessly done, WJ, with my compliments, Aloha William W J Clarke January 29, 2023 at 7:29 AM Thank you very much William. All the best :-)

Linda Alice Fowler January 28, 2023 at 6:47 AM I'll be glad of no more thermals too. Congratulations on your win WJ! :) W J Clarke January 29, 2023 at 7:28 AM Thank you very much Linda :-)