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A Date With Spring

Calm Spring 
Winters dust fades 
We’ll step out on that date 
With the symphony of bird song 
Brushing my cold bones with orange blossoms 
Above fanfares of daffodils 
Blowing ripples of warmth 
No more thermals 
Calm Spring 


Date: 21/01/23

Pen a Rictameter, Hopes of Springs return poetry contest
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Sponsor: M L Kiser

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Date: 3/31/2023 4:48:00 PM
Nicely done. I particularly liked "brushing my cold bones with orange blossoms" and the "symphony of bird song". Lovely
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W J Clarke
Date: 4/2/2023 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Barbara. Thanks for dropping by :-)
Date: 1/28/2023 3:15:00 PM
Beautiful, W.J. congrats to you
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W J Clarke
Date: 1/29/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea :-)
Date: 1/28/2023 8:33:00 AM
As a preteen new to Maine, we called them zipped-up sleeping blankets--I don't miss that...just my family I had then--effortlessly done, WJ, with my compliments, Aloha William
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W J Clarke
Date: 1/29/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thank you very much William. All the best :-)
Date: 1/28/2023 6:47:00 AM
I'll be glad of no more thermals too. Congratulations on your win WJ! :)
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W J Clarke
Date: 1/29/2023 7:28:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda :-)

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