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A Date With My Lady Luck

She meets me in a Coliseum wearing an iron bra and the chastity belt. Blindfolded and veiled, She carries a bullwhip in one hand and a spiked mace in the other; "Do you feel lucky tonight?" She asks me lovingly, "Well, do you, dear?" ~Let's get technical (Show me your best) contest by Andrea Dietrich

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 2:10:00 PM

Abdul, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/28/2014 1:40:00 AM

Brilliant write Abdul ! Congrats on top win!

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/28/2014 1:09:00 PM

Now, you being a doctor and all, you can guess the maneuvering I have to do to get "Lucky"! Thanks, Upma.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/27/2014 5:14:00 PM

haha great. Grats on the win!!

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/28/2014 1:10:00 PM

Thanks!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/27/2014 3:26:00 PM

Great top placement. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/28/2014 1:15:00 PM

Thanks Joyce.

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/27/2014 3:16:00 PM

Well, You kicked Lady Luck's butt with this one by rendering her unnecessary dear Abdul!.. Congrats on a great top win, my friend.. Hugs..Arlene

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/28/2014 1:14:00 PM

I did kick the Lady's butt, didn't I? With all the odds stacked against me! Glad you liked it. However, you don't want to piss off Lady Luck, now do you? Thanks a lot.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 7/27/2014 2:48:00 PM

Nice Abdul... Congratulations on your top placement in Andrea's contest. Verlena

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/28/2014 1:17:00 PM

Thanks Verlena.

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/27/2014 12:57:00 PM

So clever, Abdul. Congratulations on your top placement in Andrea's contest.

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/28/2014 1:03:00 PM

Thanks a bunch.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2014 12:11:00 PM

So I had no idea who wrote this one, but oh my, it was SO clever. If there is anything technically wrong with it, I can't even tell, and frankly, the "Idea" of it is what sold me. It just really struck my funny bone!! BIG congrats on your number one win in my contest.

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/28/2014 1:03:00 PM

No, wait a minute! I take it back!! I guess my 'Lady' is indeed on my side! And, I got lucky!! I knew you would like it. Thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/20/2014 12:15:00 PM

Hope you ran! Great entry for the contest- good luck. Hugs jan xx

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/21/2014 10:19:00 AM

I ran, I ran! Glad you liked it. This is how I feel when Luck is not on my side!! There's no way I can get lucky!!