A Date With My Lady Luck

She meets me
in a Coliseum
wearing an iron bra
and the chastity belt.

Blindfolded and veiled,
She carries a bullwhip
in one hand and
a spiked mace in the other;

"Do you feel lucky tonight?"
She asks me lovingly,
"Well, do you, dear?"



~Let's get technical (Show me your best)
  contest by Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 29, 2014 at 2:10 PM
Abdul, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:40 AM
Brilliant write Abdul ! Congrats on top win!
Mandani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Now, you being a doctor and all, you can guess the maneuvering I have to do to get "Lucky"! Thanks, Upma.
Nance Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 5:14 PM
haha great. Grats on the win!!
Mandani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Thanks!
Johnson Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Great top placement. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mandani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:15 PM
Thanks Joyce.
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 3:16 PM
Well, You kicked Lady Luck's butt with this one by rendering her unnecessary dear Abdul!.. Congrats on a great top win, my friend.. Hugs..Arlene
Mandani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:14 PM
I did kick the Lady's butt, didn't I? With all the odds stacked against me! Glad you liked it. However, you don't want to piss off Lady Luck, now do you? Thanks a lot.
Walker  Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Nice Abdul... Congratulations on your top placement in Andrea's contest. Verlena
Mandani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Verlena.
Gibson Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:57 PM
So clever, Abdul. Congratulations on your top placement in Andrea's contest.
Mandani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Thanks a bunch.
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:11 PM
So I had no idea who wrote this one, but oh my, it was SO clever. If there is anything technically wrong with it, I can't even tell, and frankly, the "Idea" of it is what sold me. It just really struck my funny bone!! BIG congrats on your number one win in my contest.
Mandani Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 1:03 PM
No, wait a minute! I take it back!! I guess my 'Lady' is indeed on my side! And, I got lucky!! I knew you would like it. Thanks.
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 12:15 PM
Hope you ran! Great entry for the contest- good luck. Hugs jan xx
Mandani Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 10:19 AM
I ran, I ran! Glad you liked it. This is how I feel when Luck is not on my side!! There's no way I can get lucky!!
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