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A Date With Destiny

Ice light blue eyes
Colored in like out of line crayons

Deep And Penatrating
Like the stare from your mother at 1:00 
When your breath smells like your grandpa's coffee

Lips like candy
Unwrapped
Child like
Tongue licked clean

Hair like oil painted pastels 
In The autumn sun
Like the curves of a women
Tucked away in your imagination

Her Smell is a simmered crf flavors 
Ingulfing the senses
Enriching the scattered ideas 
Deep inside of A brain

I yell out who are you?
But my eyes are still to heavy to open....

Brian Patrick Merrick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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