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A Dark Rain's, Gonna Fall

Ashen clouds in loom
As dreary as they appear
Dark rain graces earth

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February 19, 2011 at 11:17 AM

Just stopping by to add congratulations on your contest win to my other comment. This poem has so much depth for three lines. Keep on writing my friend. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

Sara Kendrick

February 6, 2011 at 4:13 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Robert Pettit

February 4, 2011 at 10:53 PM

James, congratulations on your win with this fine haiku poem.

Kory Calhoun

January 24, 2011 at 6:16 AM

Hi James - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

The Situation

January 18, 2011 at 7:35 PM

congradulations on your win. T. S.

Tahera Mannan

January 17, 2011 at 7:52 PM

Many warm congratulations for this super win.

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:26 PM

Congratulations, James. Love the image of Ashen clouds. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 17, 2011 at 2:24 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, james

Audrey Haick

January 17, 2011 at 11:13 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, James! Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2011 at 5:54 AM

Congrats James on your wonderful win in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry penned so artistically ... enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 5:43 AM

Congratulations for your win James in the "Dark Rain" contest sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

January 17, 2011 at 4:11 AM

Congratulations James, I loved this one the first time I read it ;)

Kash Poet

January 17, 2011 at 3:22 AM

Congrats James on your win in this contest!

Skat A

January 16, 2011 at 9:31 PM

Congratulations, James!thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

January 16, 2011 at 1:34 PM

Good use of imagery. I like the sense of contradiction in the last line--gives the reader something to ponder. Karen

Wilma Neels

January 16, 2011 at 11:10 AM

A very descriptive haiku.. Ek hou van jou laaste lyn, om te dink dat stormende reen eintlik 'n biejie grasie kan he :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 15, 2011 at 8:19 AM

seems like you were describing today's skies over here, James-- very vivid haiku :) love the rain nonetheless, now as for that genie-- darn it, I think he went back to his lamp and I don't know where it is??? he actually duped me, giving me genie powers for only one minute, lol ;) oh shucks! thanks for dropping by :) -- nikko :)