Gregory Richard Barden Poet Haiku

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A Dark Prescience

~   death ... breathes a heart beat -


                       each tender thrum draws closer ...


             the explosion ... Life   ~







~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Magicicada" Poetry Contest, Maureen McGreavy, Sponsor.

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Susan Gentry June 20, 2018 at 11:17 PM Congratulations on your win! Gregory Richard Barden June 20, 2018 at 11:47 PM Thank you Susan! :-)

Roy Pett June 15, 2018 at 2:36 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Gregory, brilliant Haiku. :)) Gregory Richard Barden June 20, 2018 at 11:47 PM That's very kind of you, Roy, and greatly appreciated! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 15, 2018 at 12:52 PM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gregory Richard Barden June 20, 2018 at 11:46 PM Many kind thanks, Anne-Lise - I'm pleased that you liked it! :-) <3

Eve Roper June 15, 2018 at 12:12 PM Nicely done haiku, Greg, love the imagery! Congratulations on your win ..... Hugs Eve ~' * Gregory Richard Barden June 20, 2018 at 11:46 PM Thank you very much, Eve! :-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 15, 2018 at 9:19 AM I could feel the thump thump thump reading this Greg. Wonderful potent penning, congratulations on your placement in my contest! Thank you for your support :) xomo <3 Gregory Richard Barden June 20, 2018 at 11:45 PM Thank you so very much, Mo - I'm honored to be placed so highly! Blessings! :-) <3

Constance La France June 15, 2018 at 8:57 AM Greg, congratulations on your placement in the contest with this truly amazing Haiku. Hope all is well with you. Constance Gregory Richard Barden June 20, 2018 at 11:45 PM Thank you so much, Constance - I appreciate it! :-) <3

Reason A. Poteet June 15, 2018 at 8:50 AM Nice word associations, Gregory, a beautiful fit. Salutations on your win. Gregory Richard Barden June 16, 2018 at 8:23 PM That's very kind of you, RAP - blessings and thanks! :-)

Kim Rodrigues June 14, 2018 at 8:38 PM tender thrum...nice, my friend! Gregory Richard Barden June 14, 2018 at 9:43 PM Many thanks, Kim - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Virginia Waters June 14, 2018 at 8:30 PM deep - I LIKE -- Gregory Richard Barden June 14, 2018 at 9:43 PM Thank you, Virginia - blessings! :-) <3