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A Dangerous Method - Demons Ride Her Bones

demons ride her bones
while she shrieks till her teeth hurt --
pain being pleasure

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 9:41:00 PM

DEBBIE..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2012 10:05:00 PM

Loved it,Debs. a Belated congrats to you and thanks for my place in your story contest!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/9/2012 7:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Movie Senryu" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/7/2012 3:11:00 PM

Hip hip horrrray! Congrats on this one! Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2012 1:27:00 PM

Congrats..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/7/2012 12:12:00 PM

Ah... another movie I didn't see but this senryu just grabbed me! Can't help but feel that scene! Sounds creepy! Yet I love it! Congrats on your win Debbie :D!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/7/2012 9:57:00 AM

Wow....I have watched many many movies, but this is one I don't know! So now you have stirred my curious nature...I will have to see what it is all about! Some movies are painful to watch...yet pleasureable beyond measure! :) Congrats! (ps...just watched a very painful movie this weekend...."Melancholia"....wow...talk about painful, but can't stop thinking about it!!!!!!!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/6/2012 6:32:00 AM

So u say those with mental health disorders SHOULDn't watch this movie?...well, that's like a double dog dare. NOW I HAVE TO SEE IT!! ha ha. Neat description of the pain/pleasure principle, Deb. I went to an article about Haibun by David Cobb and this is the first I have read about this form...I will work on one of these in the near future. Thanks for the wisdom on yet another Japanese form....have fun with your son...Cali has got to be warmer than here.!! Love, Gwendolen

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/2/2012 9:35:00 PM

sounds scary! Deb! happy new year! jimbo

Tirzah Conway

Date: 1/2/2012 4:25:00 PM

I do love the macabre! It's right up my alley!~Tirzah~

John Smith

Date: 1/2/2012 3:05:00 PM

Ooh! Sensual macabre. It hurts so good. Brings to mind that old Johnny Mercer song: "Save the bones for Henry Jones, 'cause Hank don't eat no meat."

A Dangerous Method - Demons Ride Her Bones

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