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Written: September 13, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ Two halves of a whole, we are, Inseparable, intertwined, Bound by the dance of life In a symphony of hearts combined. You're the rhythms that reverberate loudly My heart beats akin to a drum in my chest The exhibit of affection! Smile and look proudly That ignites my compassion, never at rest. I am the breath that satiates the air Whispering promises of zeal and devotion, Every inhale is a savor of your presence, Exhaling gratitude for this appreciation. Together, we micturate exquisite melodies, Of pounding heartbeats and steady breaths. A utopian resonance between our parodies, A tune that whispers in the depths. It is painful, this dance we share, The ache of longing when you're not there, But it is halcyon, the way our bodies move, In utopian rhythm, in an unblemished groove. It is madness, this love we embrace, The fire that consumes us, leaves no trace. But then that is life, it is our world, A whirl of emotions, where passion unfurls. Each heartbeat, each breath, a testament, To the power of love, its eternal descent, We are incomplete without each other, Bound by a love that cannot smother.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/15/2023 2:04:00 PM

What a romantic poem, full of imagery and delicate expressions of true love. True, love is sometimes madness as it unfurls and ages. I like your style and poetic voice (and your vocabulary :-) ) Sara

Silent One

Date: 9/15/2023 12:08:00 PM

You write with so much ease and every poem you post has so many beautiful lines with the most vivid imagery.. this is so romantic showcasing the delights and glory of love... we should all be able to dance into love my friend..

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/15/2023 10:05:00 AM

Absolutely love this so elegant romantic poem dear Sotto. Such poetic mastery. ‘Bound by the dance of life’/‘ I am the breath that satiates the air’. So many glorious, exquisite lines. So love the last stanza to conclude a remarkable declaration of love through your golden pen. Perfection. Thank you for sharing . Admiration and blessings to you.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/14/2023 10:02:00 PM

The dance of life with one you love, is beautifully betrayed in your eloquent poem, My friend. I can sense the depth of this Love and the oneness shared through your metaphor of dance. You are a romantic, Sotto Poet, yes you are! Enjoy your weekend! Bill

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2023 6:00:00 PM

So romantic.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/14/2023 4:54:00 PM

Very smooth lovely read! Very sweet title too :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/14/2023 7:05:00 AM

I am the breath that satiates the air" Woww what an intriguing line that is! Dear Sotto, you truly are an incredible poet and I'm always blown by the imageries that you so delicately and fascinatingly carve in your delightful writes. Although, this poem reflects myriad shades of love, how everything is perfect when two souls are so perfect together and then darkness exudes in their separation, with them longing for their union. Love is such a powerful emotion and you've described it so well!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/14/2023 4:27:00 AM

Awesome beginning to your heartfelt poem that resonates your theme throughout--an ode to two people deeply in love, my friend. Each heartbeat, each breath, a testament, To the power of love--so well said!

Valsa George

Date: 9/14/2023 1:55:00 AM

This love between the two is so consuming and perfect that one has no existence apart from the other. Their hearts beat in unison and their limbs move in ethereal symphony. "Each heartbeat, each breath, a testament, To the power of love, its eternal descent," So powerfully and beautifully expounded in perfect rhythm matching the rhythm of their heart.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/14/2023 12:19:00 AM

Bound by a love that cannot smother, lucky are the ones in an eternal dance that sways to the beating hearts of soulmates or beloved. Absolutely love the flow and depth of this poem and the way this flows with such passionate lines. Your rhymes as always are so captivating. And i love how you’ve used words like halcyon eutopian, so good and celestial . And how you’ve depicted the longing and ache in their absence is beyond soulful. So touching and heartfelt. Truly a magnificent romantic write.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/13/2023 10:21:00 PM

Stand back, give me breath, Wow That is too hotttt to touch! Lasaad you have outdone yourself. Remarkable poetry streaming with sensuality, yet a tender loving emotion embraces it in such a distinctly romantic heartfelt way. I have never seen you write this way. Its stunning. It left perfect and went right past paramount to infinitively astounding.!!!!