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A Dance of Chance

A Dance of Chance Why must I wear, My broken heart, on my sleeve, When everyone I need abandons me, Why must I watch, Them depart taking, A peice of my heart, I have loved so hard, I can barely breathe, You blew into my life, Like a summer storm, When I was most in need, You took me by the hand, And let me lead, We danced a dance, Of eternal romance and need, Under the stars and the moonlight, It was a dance, Like a game of Chance, I closed my eyes, And to my delightful surprise, You were still by my side, And now I can breathe my dear, I'll never have to watch you leave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/26/2018 5:17:00 PM
Very nice and I agree good to have a positive ending in love poetry
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Date: 8/26/2018 11:40:00 AM
I absolutely adore this! I have been having a major writers block for a long time now. This inspired me. So lovely. Thank you!
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Stormy Brown
Date: 9/1/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you for that I appreciate it , And your very welcome, So glad that I could inspire you I will have to read your poems.
Date: 8/26/2018 10:37:00 AM
Excellent writing. Love the music of it.
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Stormy Brown
Date: 9/1/2018 6:05:00 AM
Thank you for that I appreciate it, Yes I think it has great music to it too, probably why they are putting it to music as a song, after all poetry is music!
Date: 7/17/2018 11:53:00 PM
Oh, thank you, Stormy, for the hopeful and happy ending. Maybe sometimes, I'm too dark.
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Stormy Brown
Date: 7/18/2018 1:36:00 AM
I have 30
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Stormy Brown
Date: 7/18/2018 1:35:00 AM
Dreams do come true! You just have to believe!! You do wonderful work, keep it up ?? I gave 30 plus poems that could be potential songs
Date: 7/13/2018 7:58:00 PM
Love that dividing line that wraps up all the bad and turns it all to the good. It's a very clever write!
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Stormy Brown
Date: 7/17/2018 12:22:00 PM
Why thank you so much I appreciate that, it was accepted by a record company they are recording it to a song!

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