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A Dance In the Night Sky

Full luminescent Moon wears a rainbow crown, of red, orange, yellow, green, and blue. Reflecting the dancing stars of wonder in the middle of an ocean, a gown of panes gray. As the fast moving, bending white fluffy clouds drown. Pass by veiling it for moments breaking down to spellbind bright puffs of clouds conforming to different shapes that drape the night sky. Extending my arms, I arise and stand, reaching on my tiptoes to grasp the brightest star. In the distance afar magical rainbow transposes. Mystifying and strange happening developing wings, rising excitement that astound I spread my arms, spellbound, embracing the star that is sparkling. Magnificent glow in the night skies nearer the star I have to close my eyes, the brighter it became. I overcome the flame grasping a peace in my heart that defies. 2/25/2022 The Night Sky Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anna Marie Kaianah

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Date: 5/5/2022 10:45:00 AM
This poem truly takes flight as it tells a story of wondrous flight! So uplifting my friend with beautiful imagery of the moon's corona! Congratulations on your win dear friend! Ready for take off!
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Date: 5/1/2022 12:42:00 PM
Utterly gorgeous, Eve. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/1/2022 6:46:00 AM
"wears a rainbow crown" - Wow! What a picture! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/1/2022 12:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Eve! Loved this poem. <3 ~Anna Kaianah
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Date: 2/27/2022 9:56:00 AM
Lovely imagery~a dream realized. Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette
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Date: 2/27/2022 9:56:00 AM
Lovely imagery~a dream realized. Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette
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Date: 2/27/2022 8:51:00 AM
Love how you reach for the brightest star, Eve! 'May the Starlit Sky be with you!' ~ Obi wan Kanobi
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Date: 2/27/2022 4:51:00 AM
Glad you have that rare ability to reach the stars with your mind, heart and pen, I love your castle in the sky, it makes me sigh Eve, hope your keeping well, sending love and prayers your way, :)
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Date: 2/25/2022 9:04:00 AM
Superb writing, my friend. Your imagery is spot-on, and you have captured the "glow in the night skies" with personal experience. Best wishes in Anna's contest.
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Date: 2/25/2022 5:44:00 AM
This is excellent. A perfect night sky poem, Eve. I felt taken in by the beauty of it as if I was in a dream. Well done my friend! I hope your day goes well :)
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Date: 2/25/2022 4:26:00 AM
Reads like a great view you have experienced in this work. Way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for your visit to the first poem I posted. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2022 1:31:00 AM
This is outstanding!!! A perfect entry for the contest. All the best!!!
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