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A Damask Rose

A Damask Rose displays Dizzying swirls of velvet petals; Amid the greenery, as she plays. Magnificently among the nettles; And beauteous is her facade. She’s really quite aromatic, Sensual scented gift of God... Kunzite sculpture enigmatic. Reveling in her piquancy, One becomes quite mesmerized. She sings her beauty eloquently; Evocatively touches my eyes.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/28/2019 2:01:00 AM

I truly think you may have surpassed a rose's beauty with this missive, my dear one.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/28/2019 8:03:00 AM

I think it was an accident but, I may have unintentionally channeled a better poet. I do hate it when I create my own competition and it's better than mine.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/26/2019 8:40:00 AM

Awesome rhythm, ML. A beautifully executed acrostic. Bravo!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/26/2019 10:21:00 AM

Thank you; I may have nearly gotten the hang of Acrostic's.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/26/2019 7:30:00 AM

Your poem is as beautiful as the rose it so eloquently describes. Enjoyed the beauty.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/26/2019 10:22:00 AM

Wow, thanks so much; I love roses and can't write enough about them.