A Daffodil

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a tired daffodil bows down its head to sleep a day's end. nodding repeatedly; done blaring its trumpet, the entertainer calls it a day; lullaby sung by wind. (merse) Date written: 09/20/2021

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/3/2021 6:46:00 AM

A most creative piece, Edward. The personification of the Daffodil is captured well in the flower's nod, its trumpet down. Cheers, Brian

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/3/2021 7:13:00 AM

Thank you, Brian:-) I appreciate the feedback and visit! Hope you're having a wonderful Sunday, my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/21/2021 8:01:00 AM

never tried a merse, have to look the form up but as for your words, absolutely beautiful...i can see the flowers gently swaying in a gentle breeze :) hugs

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/22/2021 3:49:00 PM

Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, Sandra:-)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/20/2021 8:17:00 AM

Very enjoyable read, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/20/2021 12:29:00 PM

Thank you very much, Milt:-)