A Cursed Fate

The child is born, and they must rejoice Alas! It’s a girl, there’s no choice And she grows, oblivious Of the fate that awaits, devious She cooks and cleans, and the laundry piles No time for books, and her brother riles Isolated from the outside world The beauty unveils, hair curled Her face hidden beneath the veil Act coy, for she must avail A worthy family, a rich mate For the sake of status, a bait Money spent, the exchange done She has no place to run A caged bird is sold Her destiny until old She is blamed, accused At times bruised Unable to endure And made obscure Death looks more appealing Its dark abyss, enticing She reaches the verge But resists the urge The fire blows out And she screams and shout None showing haste As the blaze gets a taste Her death is forgotten And the law, rotten Her pitiful soul heave No one to grieve
(15 Dec 2015)
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Agustin Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 11:42 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Relish Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 7:27 PM
Thank you Beata
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 12:41 PM
- I missed you, dear Nadiya :) - hugs // Sun :) .... (Anne-Lise)
Relish Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 1:04 PM
Missing being active in psoup... a bit busy with as I am expecting a new addition to the family in another four month :)... thank you for dropping by Anne Lise... lov, nad
Mcclain Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Hi Peosy, What a wonderful write, lyrically hypnotic and emotionally evocative. You make the reader feel for the trapped poor girl--very creative and showing real poetic talent. Cheers, Brian
Mcdaid Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 6:12 AM
Female in my eyes a precious gift such a deep heartfelt excellent piece of writing nadiya almost slavery to suit others will wishing you a blessed week pal
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Poesy, nicely done.. LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 10:49 AM
so touched by this melancholic yet beautiful write, poesy... endearing!..huggs
Fleming Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 2:48 AM
Powerful...powerful...powerful! Gritty, sad...But still, in its forlorn way...Beautiful! Nicely penned, Posey. All the very best for your New Year! :-) john
A  Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 7:28 PM
POESY, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
Andresen Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 2:24 PM
- So sad .... what a fate, Nadiya - Great written - Marry Christmas to you and your family - Best wishes and Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 1:14 PM
The disappointment of having a female child can be felt in the capable way that you describe it, Nadiya. It is true that in some countries the situation is getting better, but the same can not be said of others. Many women have had to spend a life of sadness...something highlighted in this poem which ends tragically. #7 ~ Wishing you all the very best. *~* paul
Carmack Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 5:31 PM
You captured this well and delivered it hard. Impressive.
Relish Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 9:56 PM
Thank you very much Rob..
Vaso Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 10:42 PM
Nadiya, this , well its one of the best poems I read recently, You have put us into her shoes, and we weep as she wept. Beautiful poem!
Relish Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 9:55 PM
wow an honour Arthur... thank you for the kind words.
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 5:14 PM
Oh dear, Posie...hope times are getting better in some of our cultures these days. Your poem is so powerful and sad, and very emotional. Hard to believe how women are still treated this way. Hugs, Sandra
Relish Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 9:55 PM
Thank you for the read Sandra... nowadays things seems to have changed for the better
Boddie Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 10:32 PM
that is such a sad tale....but one the world should now know well....because without the heart, there can be no Love....and only God Can Produce That Up Above....what we get is only a taste....and each of us should choose our perfect flavor, otherwise it is only a waste....well done poesy....;)
Relish Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 9:54 PM
thank you Eric... n true words
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December 15, 2015 at 7:17 AM
I've seen this before and weeeee such should be told to open others eyes and views... the first two lines are great openers.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
Relish Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 9:53 PM
Thank you Olive.. yes there were times like these
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