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A Curious Dream

* * * * I wander tonight, in a curious slumber * My sleep is held captive by the man in the moon He peeks through my window, while enchanting the room * Enticing my dreams, where a choir assembles The heavens entrance me with musical rumbles The clouds twirl around to melodious tunes Enraptured tonight, in my curious slumber * My sleep is held captive by the man in the moon Against window glass, branches tap to a rumba With the breeze blowing in, curtains swirl pirouettes Joining in, are the nightingales, warbling duets As showers of meteors fall into tumble I wander tonight, in a curious slumber

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Date: 11/6/2013 8:44:00 PM
Carrie, a pretty Blame It On The Moon poem.... congrats... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/5/2013 10:34:00 PM
I'm glad someone else is charmed by the moon. I enjoyed reading your work today and thought I'd leave a note. RAY
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:21:00 PM
What a fun entry. Congratulations Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/2/2013 12:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Well deserved. This is the kind of dream that makes you want to stay in the musical surreal world.
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:53:00 PM
A very dreamy poem! This would be perfect to read before going to sleep. It's so relaxing! This was easy to read, and seemed just as effortless to write. A beautiful, beautiful poem, Carrie! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you for the wonderful comments. I appreciate it very much! :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:05:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go ...Sara
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Date: 11/1/2013 5:44:00 PM
the beauty of a cream penned to perfections...congrats on your win Carrie :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 5:18:00 PM
Just dreamy! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/1/2013 9:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Great reading! blessings, Stacey
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:25:00 AM
It always read like a winner Carrie , well done xx
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Date: 11/1/2013 4:07:00 AM
A curious and beautiful dream too, written with the style and elegance that is your tradrmark...Congrats my friend - Tim
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Date: 1/27/2012 1:11:00 AM
Carrie, another wonderful win... congrats..pd.
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Date: 1/24/2012 6:35:00 PM
Nice Carrie-wonderful images! I like the meteor anology-very creative hon-Congrats :)
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Date: 1/24/2012 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations
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Date: 1/24/2012 2:33:00 PM
Fine write,Carrie.Congratulations on your well deserved win in "Dream Land" contest.....
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Date: 1/24/2012 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Olajide's "Dream Land" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 2:02:00 PM
Congrats on your superb win. Loved it. bl
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Date: 1/11/2012 10:19:00 AM
This has an amazing feel to it Carrie, love the theme you chose.. Congratulations on your first place win :) love Wilma
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Date: 1/11/2012 6:02:00 AM
I love where you took this piece... Congrats to you Carrie!! Your and inspiration!! luv n Hugs Michael
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Date: 1/11/2012 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:15:00 AM
so dreamy, so lovely, carrie..congrats on your greeeat win! ;) huggs!
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:49:00 PM
Such a nice soft feeling this leaves one with. Congratulations Carrie
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Date: 1/10/2012 9:46:00 PM
it's so beautifully dreamy, just like what a butterfly might dream. Congratulations. (loved the man in the moon reference)
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:46:00 PM
CONGRATS CARRIE ON FIRST PLACE WIN .. AWESOME ENTRY ..
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:04:00 PM
So very pretty. Con your win, Carrie. Love, Joyce
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