A Cup Full of Joy

What a great day for golf in the middle of Fall,
feeling quite chipper I drew a smile on my ball.
My confidence rose as I stepped to the tee,
while I stared down the flag on this gorgeous par three.

I swung back the club that I held in my hands
and prayed that my ball on the green softly lands.
As the white orb pierced the blue Autumn sky,
I soon lost my sight with the sun in my eyes.

I strolled to the green with trusty putter in tow,
but no ball in sight. Where did it go?
I searched in the rough and the bunker of sand,
with extreme disappointment and useless putter in hand.

As my search would yield nothing, I was about to give up.
When a small voice whispered, "Just look in the cup."
Could it be that my little friend found his way in the hole?
Who would believe it? Not one living soul.

So I walked to the flag on this dreadful par three
and I smiled at a ball that was smiling at me.



To whom it may concern this poem is pure fiction.



11/23/20

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Agustin Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 1:26 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me delight virtually and poetically over your muse. God bless you.
Ashley Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 10:32 PM
Dear Wren, “a cup full of joy”, indeed! I adore your poem and love the title. Your last line is endearing and clever, and a grande finale to an exceptional piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Toney Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 12:33 PM
Greetings, Wren, we meet again :) This brought `a cup full of joy to my heart,' reminding me of my step-father when we'd golf every Friday morning before he had his stroke. He has since died, but he had a similar experience. Unfortunately, I never did :) Congratulations on your win on Mile 3 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 4 has already started!
Rushing Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 6:58 PM
Thank you for sponsoring the contest Mark! Golf is a great pastime, but it will sure humble you at times! I'm glad you have great memories of playing with your step-father! Have a wonderful day my friend!
Blodgett Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Casual enjoyment makes the reader feel so much at ease!! Great write!
Rushing Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Thank you for your comment Lonna. Have a wonderful weekend!
Awtry Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Love this! Made me smile :)
One Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 7:58 AM
Great poem, it flows really well..
Rushing Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 2:33 PM
Thanks Silent One, have a happy Thanksgiving!
Wolf Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Purity in its absolute form, Wren. lol. Enjoyed! ~ Gershon
Rushing Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:22 PM
Thank you Gershon! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving my friend!
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