Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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A Crystal Tear

and in an instant
unrecoverable
i heard
in the silence
the hurt of her
heart breaking
shattering
as if
nothing more
than a dainty
crystal ornament              



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on August 18, 2021 for A BRIAN STAND YOU CHOOSE contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Kim Rodrigues August 21, 2021 at 6:36 AM Ooh…I see you won and I see why! Just wonderful! Line Gauthier August 21, 2021 at 3:20 PM thank you so much, Kim ~

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2021 at 3:51 PM wow, love this one that was on one of Brian's winner lists! Hope your day is going well, Line. Line Gauthier August 20, 2021 at 5:33 PM Thank you very much, Andrea ~

M. L. Kiser August 19, 2021 at 11:42 AM Powerful imagery, has an effect. Nicely done. Line Gauthier August 20, 2021 at 5:33 PM Thanks, ML ~

Delice Arleen Skelly August 17, 2021 at 11:27 PM Breaking hearts sounding like crystal, lovely image Line...Delice Line Gauthier August 18, 2021 at 2:24 AM Thank you, Delice ~

Caren Krutsinger August 17, 2021 at 1:17 AM ah, so delicate, fine and refined Line. Line Gauthier August 17, 2021 at 3:47 AM Thanks, Caren ~