Paul Beadnall Poet Rhyme

A Cry Still Heard

May18th 2008,my daughters` labour was started
 sat by her bedside,our hands they were not parted
   sharing her every breath,every pain
     holding back to refrain.

            The tears that could easily flow
                needed strenghth for me to show
                  i was with her all the way
                   `cos in the end,it will pay.

                        Around 5 am,things came to a head
                          Hannah,gripping my hand,also the bed
                            i panicked and rang the emergency bell
                              nurses flew in " o what the hell"

                                     In a panic i had mistakenly pressed the wrong one
                                       we can all laugh, now that it`s all gone.
                                         However, Hannah gave birth to Ashton, a healthy boy
                                           as you can guess, he is my little pride and joy.

                                               " A SHEER PLEASURE TO HEAR ASHTON CRY "

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Constance La France August 16, 2011 at 2:48 PM Hi Paul, soup mail in a moment

Elizabeth Wesley August 9, 2011 at 10:17 PM What a beautiful verse to welcome a baby into the world. Save it for him, I know it will be precious. Paul Beadnall August 10, 2011 at 7:30 PM Thank very much Elizabeth. and yes i intend to save it for Ashton. Have it wrote out and framed . Blessings. Paul

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2011 at 10:40 PM wow, what a wonderful way to do the contest. GREAT idea and you described it wonderfully for us! Paul Beadnall August 4, 2011 at 10:43 PM Thanks very much Andrea,always appreaciated,blessings Paul

Bob Quigley August 4, 2011 at 10:33 AM A great write Paul. Enjoyed reading it. Congrats on your win Paul Beadnall August 4, 2011 at 1:01 PM Thanks alot Bob,always appreciated mate blessings Paul

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 10:17 AM Congratulations on your placement in Michael's "Sound Of A Cry" contest Paul. Love, Carol Paul Beadnall August 4, 2011 at 12:59 PM Thankyou very much,always appreciated blessings Paul

David Williams August 4, 2011 at 3:55 AM hey Paul, congrats on your win, David Paul Beadnall August 4, 2011 at 6:27 AM Cheers David,appreciative words,mate Paul.

Joyce Johnson August 3, 2011 at 7:01 PM One of the most welcome of cries. A very personal interpretation of the contest. Congratulations.Love, Joyce Paul Beadnall August 4, 2011 at 6:25 AM Thank you very much,Joyce. Your words are always encouraging and appreciated,hope you are in fine fettle? Blessings from Paul.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 6:19 PM Congrats Paul on your excellent win in the contest with these touching words of poetry luv.. Paul Beadnall August 4, 2011 at 6:19 AM Thanks very much,Linda-Marie,your kind words,always appreciated..blessings Paul.

Sara Kendrick August 3, 2011 at 7:38 AM Enjoyed reading this one and sharing with you the birth of a grandchild and the love of a father for his daughter..Sara

Doris Culverhouse August 2, 2011 at 7:36 PM enjoyed reading today.... Paul Beadnall August 2, 2011 at 7:59 PM Thanks very much,your positive feedback is always appreciated ... blessings Paul

Cory Long August 2, 2011 at 7:33 AM this is awesome good luck in the contest cory Paul Beadnall August 2, 2011 at 8:01 PM Thanks very much ,positive feedback is always nice .. Blessings Paul